Lonely at the Top. (RisefromtheAshez)

[Spyder]

Link Of Feed
Lonely at the Top

Lyrics:Spyder
Production:RisefromtheAshez
Graphic:Spyder
Mixing:Spyder



You may better my eight legs and my bugs eyes
But for me to better you, all I need is one mic!
Given it my best, thinkin you’re high pest?
Sorry, but nothins to Fly for Spyder to digest.
Swallow the mic, and as it dissolves in my acid
The heartburn makes me spit flames from the passion
You like ‘Flava Flav’, if you don’t stop it now
Ill have ‘hands on ya chest’ til your Clock runs out!
Elite soldier with the most violent of ranks
Blood killed Dracula from the one vile he drank.
Drunk driving a tank, catch my Tectonic Plates?
Now watch as I Shift into Gear, the Earth shakes!
Livin a cursed fate, success has changed me
New fake friends want somethin, but it aint me,
Just wanna hand out and be in the news steady
Beggin for some ‘Hang time’, lemme get the noose ready!

Hook X2
Though I admire you admiration, Spyder’s your aspiration
The higher I climb is the higher I get my name in.
Ask if I have any fears, only of the drop
In a league of my own, its so lonely at the top.

Xavier atop glaciers, and as you grasp for life
I’ll do more than break the ice when you get Jack’s frostbite!
Not right, I’m practically a sin to the game
Katrina fled the second she caught Wind of my name.
Thought I had Hulk complexion, mean unfriendly
But it was just my reflection was Green with Envy.
Wrath of the Titan… a frightening God
Striking Christ from the heights of a lightning rod.
My own worst enemy? Pay attention you’ll see that,
Echo can’t even mock me, it just responds in feedback.
Pop a speed tab, Recover then I Relapse
Say, “break a leg”… then leave your Knees Capped!
Other dudes rappin, I predict boring, dumb
Before we begun you can just tell that I surely won.
My Timeline off, because when the stories done
The stroke of midnight’s when the Mourning come!

Hook X2
Though I admire you admiration, Spyder’s your aspiration
The higher I climb is the higher I get my name in.
Ask if I have any fears, only of the drop
In a league of my own, its so lonely at the top.

The cream of the crop, im who you need to battle
Only soldier Shinin, fighting in the league of Shadows
Put my record on the walk of fame, my wins cemented
Nine lives, shot my mind eight times just to test it!
These others rappers claimin they king when they nothin
Write with an Epi-pen to take the Sting out your punches!
Thing is you gutless, just sayin that your skill slopin
Been on my last breath since 09, and its still goin.
I got a score to settle, get scorched when hell burns
slap bitches takin 'Palm for granted' like Fortunetellers.
So now you hard… ill drop bombs with letters sent
Cause my Light-Work surpasses that of Thomas Edison’s.
Smack his head again, mine is a style you shouldn’t rob
Bite of a Viper, probably one you couldn’t Dodge!
Drinkin problem, so watch as my peril, it spirals
Poke holes in the side and shotgun barrel of rifles!

Hook X2
Though I admire you admiration, Spyder’s your aspiration
The higher I climb is the higher I get my name in.
Ask if I have any fears, only of the drop
In a league of my own, its so lonely at the top.

[Spyder]

bump...

[Scrubz]

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Thats what came up when i clicked the link.

[Spyder]

thanks for the feed Rise

and Scrubs, idk man it worked fine for me, idk what to do about it haha
thanks for tryin though

[Spyder]

seriously though....

[Trimss]

This was better, you keep improving man. The beat is good so heads up to Rise for that.

Delivery is good but sometimes it feels like you tone down your voice, I don't know. Which software do you use to mix? Cool edit?

Sorry for not being really active in this section man, i'm having writers block right now, I barely write and record.

[Spyder]

can still feed haha

but thanks for checkin tho man, and yes i use cool edit

[B.A.D.]

hey man, I'll leave you some feed

first of all, what the fuck with the beat Ashez... its amazing. you fucking asshole hahaha. I love it, I wish I would've used it haha.

Spyder, your mixing sounds really clean, good job on that. try a different EQ, I mean its really good, but I think you are boosting high frequencies too much, try actually cutting them a little bit and gently boosting lows. see how that sounds.

your flow is good but I feel with practice it will get better.

from all of that, is just advice, cuz you did a really good job on that man.

but the thing again is your layovers man, they really really ruin the track, they are way way way off and very loud, give them a fix man, I really recomend that. keep them lower and try to match your words cuz otherwise it sounds really bad haha.

like I said, great song, splendid beat, good flow. keep at it bro

[Trimss]

If you really need some feedback, you can always comment on other guys tracks and ask them to return the favor. Most of them will do it. (y)

You can also PM guys like Solace, etc.. Maybe they'll tell you what's wrong and shit.

[Spyder]

hey thanks for checkin Ax really appreciate it

yeah on this track im working i think i got the overlays down as far as timing,
but volume, i was making em the same volume and u said to loud which i agree.
then i made them a decent amount lower and u said to quiet, now i make them in
the middle and their still too loud.

i guess i just gotta keep playin with it haha

props on the feed man

[randomghost]

not my type of beat....ur flow is good at points...delivery is aight...cool song but it gets boring at parts...hook is cool....keep em comin...would be cool of u returned the feed : viewtopic.php?f=38&t=143219

[Spyder]

thanks for the feed geno and ghost,

and i dont member that line, but it rhymed with the previous line
and fit with my tectonic "plates" and shift into gear earth shakes.

so idk lol

[Spyder]

:O ill have to re-listen ahha

thanks for the feed though bro.
you commin to audio anytime soon?

[Vettori]

Some of the things you say aren't too compelling
Work on your content, Quality was good enough to understand you, but needs alot of improvement
turn down your Layers, you shouldn't be able to hear them really.
and sometimes your layers weren't lining up with the original Vocal.

Wasn't a good song IMO, But i don't judge from one song