Eedee - "Dear God" & "New Beginning" [Singles]

[Eedee]

The two final singles from my New Beginning LP I released recently. (You can find the thread here: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=144471 )

*Produced by RiseFromTheAshez
*Lyrics in the video descriptions
*You can find my Facebook/Reverbnation page as well in the video descriptions.

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=145300

11. "Dear God"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KcECO3ViTEk

18. "New Beginning"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y0uY3v9Fel8

* Just as a note, my first single "So Lonely" isn't up on YouTube (yet, I'll try to put that up there soon) but you can find it here. It's track #13, so you'll have to hit "All Songs" and scroll down. http://www.reverbnation.com/eedee

Thanks, I'd appreciate any feedback!

[TripleNineThree]

Dear God
Beat - The beat was alright, nothing special but it wasn't bad either - 7/10
Lyrics - The lyrics were good, you had a message in your lyrics and wasn't just rambling (As you know I do disagree with your message lol) - 9/10
Delivery - You're delivery is good. You can tell that you're putting emotion into the song - 9/10
Quality/Mixing - This is where the song fell off. You mic quality is good but your vocals are turned up too high and I heard quite a few points where it was too loud and caused your vocals to sound muffled. Also, you could do more effects such as adlibs, echoes, and overdubs - 6.5?10

Overall - 7.5/10 - Decent track!


New Beginning
Beat - The beat starts out nice, I like the acoustic guitar feel to it, then the beat comes in and it sounds pretty good; I enjoyed it - 8/10
Lyrics - Same as your song before. Can't knock much, you're lyrics are cohesive unlike most dudes on here - 9/10
Delivery - This was also very good. This was better than the other song in my opinion. Maybe it's because you changed it up more in this track - 9/10
Quality/Mixing - This was an improvement from your last track but the same advice still applies. Expecially on your hook. You could double or even triple up your vocals then matched them up and pan two of them out to the side slightly so that the chorus sticks out more. You're chorus actually sounds more boring than your verses which should be the other way around (This could be easily fixed with some mixing) - 6/10

Overall - 8/10 - Goodjob on this track man. I relate to it because I'm graduating this weekend

[Eedee]

Thanks for the feed! I've been messing around with reverb recently and whatnot, so hopefully my future tracks will have a more professional feel than these.

[mdemaz]

Nice pair dude, you have improved dramatically.

I don't even need to comment.

Keep elevating, remember, anger comes off as epic when you don't try soo hard.

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks for the feed! I've been messing around with reverb recently and whatnot, so hopefully my future tracks will have a more professional feel than these.

Make sure you experiment with different EQs, compressors, and different tube settings depending on which program you're using. Send me a short acapella to tripleninethree@gmail.com and I'll experiment with your vocals

[Eedee]

Thanks for the feed! I've been messing around with reverb recently and whatnot, so hopefully my future tracks will have a more professional feel than these.

Make sure you experiment with different EQs, compressors, and different tube settings depending on which program you're using. Send me a short acapella to tripleninethree@gmail.com and I'll experiment with your vocals

Mkay, I don't know when I'll be able to record though. Soon hopefully. I go to my brother's apartment, he has professional mics with a soundboard and whatnot, they do my EQ/compressor stuff beforehand. Then I usually just tweak the volume etc on it. But this time I'll play around with reverb, etc.

[Mr.DGAF]

Good stuff dude. I only got to listen to Dear God, and it was impressive. My only real complaint is that sometimes the flow lacks. Like sometimes the syllables are a bit, just slightly, rushed or stretched out to flow on the beat. The lyrics were really nice, the message was clear and you executed it well. But at points the flow lagged, and that's really the only complaint I have on that one. Good music man, I'll try and get to the other single soon.

[Ticalrecords]

cool song man i listened to Dear God it was pretty damn good your delivery has gotten loads better i was impressed, its actually listenable now (no offense lol). i liked your message and the actual lyrics, i can tell you put alot of thought into it. good stuff man. mind returning the favor?
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