AhdduB - CCMH

[Ticalrecords]

POF: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=145256

http://soundcloud.com/ahddub/ccmh-prod-by-capz-beats

had a day dream – involving ladies
A lot of cocaine and a new Mercedes
All white everything – yes maam
I’m the man – like god damn
I am – so out of my element
Motherfuckers think I’m intelligent
I’d rather have it the other way around
its that much easier to fucking play em out/
you think I need this watch to draw attention?
We both know it comes with its consequences
that watch and shoes costs an arm and a leg
to a stick up kid – yea karma’s a bitch
And These label execs are just like you
Go round with a bigger watch than I do
They got faster cars – huger houses
Corporate money – I wouldn’t doubt it/


Cars clothes money hoes
Sing the anthem and it fucking goes
Cars clothes money hoes
Shrooms dro molly coke
Cars clothes money hoes
Cars clothes money hoes
yall don’t care – so why talk
Just say hello to mr. nice watch


Ya See - they all about that fishscale
Impress with the chain when the wrist fails
But ya know what if I really made it that far
Motherfuckers can’t believe I came in that car
Can’t believe I’m in the same venue as them
I’m sorry but the people I meant to offend
Are too busy admiring the watch and chain
What to do but go along with this awful game/
Thought I committed rap suicide
When I went from white t to suit and tie
Switched back – now all of them love me
a dead man walking the runway
Aite– enough with the sarcasm
Weed Creeps like passersby to car crashes
That’s right girl – all night girl
Come here - take a trip into my world, its all about


I don’t even care how much an adaumar costs
Have you seen it? How can I help but not talk
About how gold glitters –feels like a winner
Gives hoes jitters – cuz you can buy em dinner
At the most expensive place - she got expensive taste
don’t flush money down the toilet – unless its waste
If ya catch my drift –yea like jay said
fed her fiftys till her shit made sense
at least the watch fucking helps
in covering up where I cut myself
I got issues – and choose to hide em
With the bluest diamonds – like the mood that I’m in
Got fat rubies to match my eyes
I’m always high – it’s a fact of life
Got fucking emeralds to match your skin
Green with envy – I just have to grin/

[B.A.D.]

hey bro, you need to fix up a couple stuff if you want to sound better and appeal more to the listener

first off, your vocals sound very clean but too far and above the beat, you need to put your vocal volume a little little bit down, then add a stronger wetter reverb to remove the dryness of your sound, and most important add layovers to your verse.

also, I like your delivery, emotion is perfect, but you need to smooth yourself out, cuz you sound way too young and immature (not saying that you are at all, but your voice sounds like that), you need to be smoother.

the lyrics are well structured and written, your flow could be perfected, but its overall good.

I liked this song in particular, but the amateur-ish sound from it will not get you many plays and listeners will not feel convinced. So try to step it up now on the creative level. You got the lyrics, the flow, the emotion, the quality.. but not the attitude.

so keep it up.

and also, I've told you before but I still maintain my opinion that the name AhdduB is not that good. But thats up to you

keep up. I'll send you that beat in a bit

[mdemaz]

Yeah, what Ax said, you don't wanna make your vocals too low though, because then the beat will engulf them.
Try something around 50 percent to 75 percent the full dynamic range of the vocals.
Well, actually, try spitting on more quiet beats too, that way you can just lower the shit to 50 percent.

Good luck, guy.

[Ticalrecords]

hey thanks for the listen guys i really appreciate it

[Eedee]

As always... lyrics are great. Rhymes are great. And haha, your sarcastic voice is fuckin' hilarious as always. In a good way. Brings a smile on my face. The beat was awesome. Great pick.

The voice effect on the chorus was fuckin' awesome - the flow on that was insane.

Good shit.

[Trimss]

You really sound sarcastic on tracks. That's amazing lmao.

And your vocals are too high, just try to blend them into the beat. Do you mix them? Like which software do you use?

[Ticalrecords]

thanks man appreciate the listen. i use protools. i try mixing man idk i been told its listenable loll

[Cookzee]

i thought the emotion was perfect man, but the vocals were a little too loud, however when they are as nice as they are, im not usually one to complain :P it was an extremely nice job so be proud of yourself for that, just maybe work on your mixing ability a little bit more... im dropping a new album so tell me what you think b

[SajN]

^ Pretty much these people said, but also that you didn't say the whole word a couple places, like "intelligent" in the 6th line. Should've said the whole word.