Joel Venom - Burn/Paper Tags Freestyle

[Joel Venom]

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LEt me know what you guys think!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ws0nXQ39UOA

and also get at me for collabs if your interested at joelvenom@tm3records.com or joelzvenom@gmail.com

[Joel Venom]

appreciate the feedback my man!

[TripleNineThree]

Wow! You KILLED this! Your flow is on point the entire time and your delivery is basically what makes the whole thing. Your delivery is amazing on this track man, and your mixing is also really good, your doubles are on point the entire time.

Keep this up fam!

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[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Nice track dude, the flow was really good! keep it up!

[Joel Venom]

thanks you guys and no doubt i'll leave feedback!

[voice23]

Yea man that is a pretty sick flow.. solid!

[Joel Venom]

appreciate it! voice!

[SajN]

Ah, you're the one I follow on Twitter, nice nice.

Really good delivery. It fits. Your flow is very good too, good rhyming too.
Since I am not an English person, I don't caught all the lyrics by the first few listens, but what I understood so far was cool, nothing special that I want to complain at or anything.

[_Ironic_]

sup homey...

dope rhymes, dope flow, dope delivery, not much to hate on, you got a firm grasp on what you want out of the track. it's always refreshing to hear your shit. the multies at 1:40 were well placed and sounded nice.

overall, this shit was dope as hell. keep droppin music!

-RTF if u get a chance

[B.A.D.]

I didnt like the beat, but you def murdered it.

really nothing much of feedback I can give you, so seem to have this nailed. Great energy

very enjoyable man, keep at it homey