Redzek - More Than Love ( NEW single)

[Le Tunisien]

i decided to not just upload the tape "No Shame" cuz i thought ill get better feedback if i posted song by song till i have posted all of it...so check out this one.. a song i did for my girl and she loved it

lyrics on the screen along with pics
feedback appreciated

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QLGtrufOsDE







feedback link :http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=145256

[Trimss]

Don't take it thee wrong way man but this is soooooo corny.. Not really my type of track, I'll probably like your other tracks more.

[Le Tunisien]

Don't take it thee wrong way man but this is soooooo corny.. Not really my type of track, I'll probably like your other tracks more.

i know i know its soft as fuck..its for my girl like..how do you expect it to be...i got my other tracks in the usual way,dont worry ill drop one soon

[SajN]

In many parts it was very, very difficult to understand what you were saying. I liked the way you rapped the first 4 bars or something, it was nice.

The hook didn't fit you at all imo, I don't think your voice was good enough for singing. I didn't like that. Plus that autotune at the end of the singing could have been done better... it didn't fit. Same goes after the 2nd verse and the hook... the bridge and whatever you had there.

[Le Tunisien]

In many parts it was very, very difficult to understand what you were saying. I liked the way you rapped the first 4 bars or something, it was nice.

The hook didn't fit you at all imo, I don't think your voice was good enough for singing. I didn't like that. Plus that autotune at the end of the singing could have been done better... it didn't fit. Same goes after the 2nd verse and the hook... the bridge and whatever you had there.

i knoooow .. fuck it i cant sing , but i try..im doin my best anyways thx for listening saj , you should drop some too

[SajN]

It's a personal song, to your girl, so if she likes it then it's fine, I guess

I know I should, but I need to make the songs first, lol

[Le Tunisien]

It's a personal song, to your girl, so if she likes it then it's fine, I guess

I know I should, but I need to make the songs first, lol

yeah she loved it.. and yeah where u at with ur raps..write some shit and record it

[ashley94]

I love it, so sweet to make a song for your girlfriend..

[Le Tunisien]

I love it, so sweet to make a song for your girlfriend..

hell yeah ash

[da r star]

Did you produce the track as well?

I like the beat more than I like the actual song.

This is the first song I've heard from you (first time in this section). My first gripe about this is that I barely could understand what you were saying the whole time. You need to work on the mix so we can understand better what you are saying. But I did like your flow and your rhyme scheme was nice with multi.

Also, I think the hook was ridiculously corny lol.