Looking In The Mirror

[TripleNineThree]

LoF - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=146335
Song [With Lyrics] - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1izj3qf50mk

Let me know what you think! If you drop a link I'll be sure to return the feed!

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks man I appreciate the support!!!

[Wallace]

I liked it, the lyrics are on point.

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks man I appreciate the feed!

[mdemaz]

I really enjoyed this dude, riveting subject matter and themes, the hook is great.

I suggest that you try to make your voice a little bit more solid, you seem to sound awkward at times, that's easily fixed though and it's not really a big deal, just remember to memorize your lyrics and you'll be fine, don't rush the recording process, take breaks, stand in front of the microphone for a few minutes and get into the zone.

You're gonna be great, dude, keep it up!

[TripleNineThree]

I really enjoyed this dude, riveting subject matter and themes, the hook is great.

I suggest that you try to make your voice a little bit more solid, you seem to sound awkward at times, that's easily fixed though and it's not really a big deal, just remember to memorize your lyrics and you'll be fine, don't rush the recording process, take breaks, stand in front of the microphone for a few minutes and get into the zone.

You're gonna be great, dude, keep it up!

Thanks for the advice man I'll be sure to put it into practice. Thanks for the feedback and the encouragement fam!

[Rollimeo]

This is really nice, good song

[TripleNineThree]

This is really nice, good song

Appreciate the feed man!

[Nick419]

The mixing and quality of this song was phenomenal almost sounded professionally done. The hook was great and suited very well with the overall theme. Great track man you have a new fan

[TripleNineThree]

The mixing and quality of this song was phenomenal almost sounded professionally done. The hook was great and suited very well with the overall theme. Great track man you have a new fan

Thanks bro I appreciate the encouragement!!!

[Solace]

This chorus is insane lol, I do wonder what it's from originally... I can't honestly critique this track much, this is a really good song. Your flow is very polished at most parts. Your delivery is good. If I wanted to be picky, your overlays could be turned down by 2db. This is definitely one of my favourites that I've heard of yours and much better than Call Me Crazy and I'm Good. Keep it up TNT.

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks man I appreciate you taking the time to leave feed on my tracks!

[Solace]

No problem, your music just deserves more recognition on this site and so I decided to just take a couple minutes to help you out.

[TripleNineThree]

One of the best songs I've seen on here man. Honestly. I checked your others too and they're good, but this is definitely the best/my fave.

Keep up the good work man.

Wow man, that's really encouraging. Thanks!

[Trimss]

This is really, really dope man.

I think you can actually improve your rhyming, not like it's the most important thing but there's not much to say about your songs. The beat is dope, the sampled hook too. (I guess it's a sample.)

about the content.. I'm religious too, not christian though. It's pretty cool to hear your thoughts, and the fact that you're really that dedicated to God and music. But I wish sometimes we could hear you spit some other type of songs, like maybe storytelling, reflecting on how your past was bad (read that in the other thread ) and maybe even personal songs about your love life and things like that.

Maybe you don't like rapping about crazy stuff such as horrorcore, backpack raps or something I don't know.

Anyway, this song was really cool. Enjoyed it a lot.