carnage (rapaddict92)_wish upon a star

[rapaddict92]

let me know what you think >> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BezTZVo_Et0 verse starts at 0:56 after sample (this older then my last post sorry i lied)

feedback link: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=146856&p=1958343#p1958343

[mdemaz]

You sound really bored on this track.
Err, not bad, though.
I find the low quality of the vocals to be a bit nostalgic actually.

You could put a bit more voice tone variation in your delivery, it's just the same shit most of the time.

Ehh, not bad, not awful, but not awesome. you gotta tighten the flow up a bit too.

Keep it up.

[Eedee]

That beat has an Infinite feel to it. Simple melody with some solid drums going on. Nice.

Your flow was ehhh, wasn't feeling it. Lyrics was ehhh, didn't feel those either. However, the whole aura of this song was laid back and it was pretty chill.

Your vocal quality was bad, you need a better mic and/or better mixing.

You have potential just tighten up your flow and work on getting a better mic if you want to sound serious as a rapper.

[12characters]

That beat was hypnotizing as fuck tbh.

No feed. Just had to say that.