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Postby Solace » Aug 11th, '12, 15:50

I hope you can all excuse my tired ass delivery.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-mc3uDbBx90

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Re: Random 16

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Aug 13th, '12, 00:21

Awesome freestyle dude. The rhyming was really great, better than most of the audio stage lyrics (not saying theyre bad but this was definitely pretty good!) Your flow was on point the whole time, I couldnt find a part in the track that didnt flow! As for Delivery I dont know too much about it, ( is it the way you end a line??) Lol if so then it was actually pretty good, I have no complaints dude, loving your tracks! Also the mixing sounds really nice! keep it up.
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Re: Random 16

Postby mdemaz » Aug 13th, '12, 01:07

Murdered, good job, keep it up, bye.

But seriously, there really isn't much to say.

You show a high level of consistency on each track you've done lately, err, you do sound a little bit anti-climatic on this track, I felt like you could of ended the song with a different line, lol.
Good work, have fun recording on the mixtape.

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Re: Random 16

Postby Eedee » Aug 14th, '12, 03:59

Same ole Solace haha

But seriously, your delivery seems the same on every track. It would be great if you switch it up sometimes. Start yelling, or whispering or something. Switch it up sometimes, dude.

Otherwise the lyrics were great as always.
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Re: Random 16

Postby Dlovetv » Aug 15th, '12, 20:25

Lyrics were on point, nice and agressive
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Re: Random 16

Postby Solace » Aug 16th, '12, 03:32

Thanks guys, all of you it means a lot. I'm gonna take this down though, don't really enjoy it myself looking back on it. Again, thank you for posting during my clear inactivity.
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