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Aint it great-- wait, hes feeding me freakin people
Solace wrote:Aint it great-- wait, hes feeding me freakin people
LOL that was actually quite funny.
I think the first verse shouldn't have been there, 'cause it was obviously you fucking around and you actually tried harder on the 2nd and 3rd. Who did the chorus? I don't have much criticism on the actual rapping, I could fuck around with you about the video but that's really non-important. Keep dropping man. Why the name Cobo Black?
Trimss wrote:This reminds of the kind of music you could find on a fighting movie such as Undisputed or something. Great
RainMan44 wrote:This shit was fresh. I was really feeling it. You switched the flow up a couple times in each verse, I liked that.![]()
One of my favorite parts was
"Now you Know -- WATCH HIM
Hows his flow? -- Awesome
How you roll? Caution, you don't want no problems
Fuck it man -- Nah Bro
Whats the plan? -- Walk Slow
Hes Comin man! Wit Hot flows, smoke'em like a marlboro's."
I also liked the chorus.
3rd verse is so dope.
I think you got a lot of potential. Keep pushing man, very good shit
TJMarrs wrote:I gotta agree that the third verse was dope. Liked it a lot. I like what you did with the whole song. Great job.
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