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Eedee ft. WordSmith - "Personal Army" [Week 1]

Postby Eedee » Oct 8th, '12, 02:25

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*Produced by Allrounda Beats

*First drop from my new 8 Week Project where every weekend for 8 weeks I'll drop a new track. Enjoy. Btw, WordSmith is a personal friend of mine who I wanted to jump on a track with me. This is his first time on the mic. I think he did pretty well for a first timer. :y:




[Verse 1: Eedee]
It pains me to see when you two aren't very well
I try to keep your head up, maybe help you carry Hell.
It's got to this point where actions spark a consequence
God's a bitch if your two attractions are a Father's wish.
A heart that sought a kiss, far away from her embrace
How we are a mouthpiece, on the surface is a perfect ache.
But deep down I can tell that you're in pain because of distances
I'm counting the days until you scream of fucking wishes missed.
And mission trips to mend that broken heart of yours
Married and divorced, I know she opened darkened doors.
And to know the two of you in struggles it's a bitch to see it
But man if I said it once, never ever quit believing
Shit's a reason why you've gone through all these ups and downs
It's for your own happiness you feel until you're in the fucking ground.
You'll come around and I'll be by your side until
Your dying will, you crying still? You're the star of this flying film.


[Chorus: Eedee]
Get up, don't let up, just gotta keep your head up,
Get some of the stuff you love, come here and give a chest bump
To your best bud in the world, I'll always have your back
Man, this track's grand, personal army, that's a fact. (x2)


[Verse 2: WordSmith]
Sometimes I just feel like I'm lost without an arm,
Keeping the people that I hold near and dear out of harm.
My protection cannot reach away 400 miles,
And danger can come from different faces, different styles.
And someone came along that could give me what I needed,
In exchange for some of my own help in matters that were heated.
He requested that I give assistance cuz his times were hard,
So I took up his boxing gloves, it was his problems I sparred.
From that point on, I swear, yeah we had each other's backs
We did our very best to keep our blood brother's intact.
It was then I cracked the whip, got his head straight,
To get him through the courtship, all this fucking red tape.
There will be no sour grapes, not after I'm through,
So long as he keeps doing what I'm telling him to do.
So here's a fucking life raft, take a look at my craft,
When I'm done your loneliness will be a fucking dark past!


[Verse 3: Eedee]
I told myself that one day, someday I'll find the girl
I hold my breath in this gravitron, I need her touch to right the world.
And light this earth, I called upon for your advice
I'm sick of being lonesome, there HAS to be more to life.
You've been told of strife in basically every song I've done
I haven't felt like this for a girl so it's fucking all or none.
I'm not a baller, son, but I do have decent qualities
I wonder if she notices... that's seeing all of me.
Being hard to beat has shown me my true weaknesses
There's a follower within me and you speak to this.
If I worked as hard for her as I do in every rhyme I spit
This timing, SHIT! Overworking till I died of this.
I'm tired of this, tied to this post, I'm immobile
Not even the wrath of God can move me cuz the total
strength that I have can overcome any hurdle, leap
or fork in the road, WordSmith, thanks for rebirthing me.
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Re: Eedee ft. WordSmith - "Personal Army" [Week 1]

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Oct 8th, '12, 03:44

Great job, this should be a cool project!! Your flow is definitely different in this one.

Eedee your rhyming is dope dude, you had multis all the way, the delivery is also great, and mixing is good too, I'm not sure but this sounded like a little bit lower quality than your others? Maybe a different mic? or it could be cause I'm listening to this on a different computer than normal, any ways, I like the flow on this one although it was a bit different! nice job.
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Re: Eedee ft. WordSmith - "Personal Army" [Week 1]

Postby Eedee » Oct 8th, '12, 04:07

ShAdYTiLIDie wrote:Great job, this should be a cool project!! Your flow is definitely different in this one.

Eedee your rhyming is dope dude, you had multis all the way, the delivery is also great, and mixing is good too, I'm not sure but this sounded like a little bit lower quality than your others? Maybe a different mic? or it could be cause I'm listening to this on a different computer than normal, any ways, I like the flow on this one although it was a bit different! nice job.


Nah, I used a professional mic with a profession board, 320 kbps, etc... It should be pretty high quality. Doesn't sound low to me. :unsure:

Anyway, thanks for listening. I appreciate it. :y:
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Re: Eedee ft. WordSmith - "Personal Army" [Week 1]

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Oct 8th, '12, 04:24

No prob, probably just this different computer!
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Re: Eedee ft. WordSmith - "Personal Army" [Week 1]

Postby Eedee » Oct 8th, '12, 04:34

ShAdYTiLIDie wrote:No prob, probably just this different computer!


Hopefully haha. Otherwise that would suck.
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Re: Eedee ft. WordSmith - "Personal Army" [Week 1]

Postby mdemaz » Oct 8th, '12, 06:30

This sounded fresh to me.

I was getting sick of the same shit on each track.

So yeah, keep elevating.
Keep us updated on stuff.
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Re: Eedee ft. WordSmith - "Personal Army" [Week 1]

Postby Eedee » Oct 8th, '12, 06:37

mdemaz wrote:This sounded fresh to me.

I was getting sick of the same shit on each track.

So yeah, keep elevating.
Keep us updated on stuff.


I was actually going to record a few things for our shit but I fucking forgot the beats/lyrics up in my dorm room 400 miles away!! It was frustrating...

But I did get a lot done this weekend.

Thanks for the looks, brah.
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Re: Eedee ft. WordSmith - "Personal Army" [Week 1]

Postby mdemaz » Oct 8th, '12, 07:08

It's all good, I'm making the transition back into rap atm and the stuff I learnt about mixing from the metal songs came in handy; my vocals sound phenomenal and I can't wait to drop some new shit here.
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Re: Eedee ft. WordSmith - "Personal Army" [Week 1]

Postby Eedee » Oct 8th, '12, 07:10

mdemaz wrote:It's all good, I'm making the transition back into rap atm and the stuff I learnt about mixing from the metal songs came in handy; my vocals sound phenomenal and I can't wait to drop some new shit here.


Yeah should be good. I'm looking forward to it.

This winter break I'll definitely get my vocals in for our songs. Sorry I've been lacking the output you expect of me.
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Re: Eedee ft. WordSmith - "Personal Army" [Week 1]

Postby mdemaz » Oct 8th, '12, 07:17

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mdemaz wrote:It's all good, I'm making the transition back into rap atm and the stuff I learnt about mixing from the metal songs came in handy; my vocals sound phenomenal and I can't wait to drop some new shit here.


Yeah should be good. I'm looking forward to it.

This winter break I'll definitely get my vocals in for our songs. Sorry I've been lacking the output you expect of me.

Lmao, it's not like my output has been any good recently either.

Things would of been a lot easier if we lived together.

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Re: Eedee ft. WordSmith - "Personal Army" [Week 1]

Postby Eedee » Oct 8th, '12, 07:23

Dafuq :confusion:


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