2 Videos from a Rap Battle I'm in

[Cobo Black]

Here are my two videos I made in a battle with a friend from Jiu-Jitsu. If you want to read the background and watch both his and mine, you can scroll down.


CoBo Black Verse Round 1

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WbwzUJOEXms&feature=plcp


CoBo Black Verse Round 2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=37CAOWZaDnM&feature=plcp


Round 3 will be a live freestyle, with no writtens, coming soon.




A friend of mine who knows I grew up battling and writing songs, randomly called me out on facebook to battle and posted this video of him rapping about me. So I responded, here is. (FYI Andre doesn't rap or consider himself a freestyler or anything, so bare with his verses, I think he did pretty good, especially in the beginning, if you do any critiquing...you can do mine )


Andre's Verse Round 1 (You can stop at 1:55, that is the only part he wrote for me and he just talks and freestyles after)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_ajG5CkAIkI


CoBo Black Verse Round 1

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WbwzUJOEXms&feature=plcp

LYRICS:
let me get this straight,
you prolly didn't think,
forgot to concentrate,
and gotta consequence to pay,
glad you got some confidence,
yeah dawg thats great,
But where the fucks your common sense,
a lot of that was gay...
half of what you say,
was a paragraph away/
from wearing mascara with a pair of faggots at your grave..
as I was hittin play,
I was laughin in a way,
I was glad it was the internet,
instead of in your face,
I still don't understand how you dumb enough to thank,
what your doing is dangerous, you fucking with a tank,
its almost like you isn't even sober, your insane,
started playin on a track, and got run over by a train,
The way you rhyme sixteen, with sixteen, almost sixteen times...like its impressive...
not only is it dumb as shit, something in it just seems, like its missing one thing, and its excessive..
You fucking with a monsta, someone get a docta..
gotta nother sick teen, its prolly someones daughta...
Dawg you outta probly, start off with a sorry..
before I hit record again and chop you into parsley...
all I need is seasoning, for me to eat him always...
slaughter you for barba-que, or even when he's sautéed
michael myers creepin, can see me in the hallways...
chop him into peices, don't even need a saw blade...


I'm busting shots at your ass,
You started war with your raps...
I warned you before that....I'm back.. I'm back.. mother fucker I'm...pop pop pop pop


I'm busting shots at your ass,
You started war with your raps...
I warned you before that....I'm back.. I'm back.. mother fucker I'm...pop pop pop pop

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Andre's Verse Round 2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C2otSsUJaXE


CoBo Black Verse Round 2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=37CAOWZaDnM&feature=plcp

Lyrics:
Well Jesus always told me...
always turn the cheek,
but I don't always listen/
hope he, forgive's me, for murdering...
the beat, cuz now there is none, I had to do this acapella,
for me ta get it done,....plus I knew that music's health was,
a little under the weather,
Bur andre wanted to rap,
In fact he started this crap,
too bad he's hard headed, and retarded/
and became a part of the trap,
...its hard to adapt, when the snare starts to snap...
...You see, cuz I'm the shit, and you barely farts on a tracks...
I see you on the beat...
you really thinking hard when you rap,
I wanted to pick you apart,
But every part of it was wack.....
When you target a shark,
Make sure it don't target you back,
Cuz if it sees you...its eat you,
Homie you smarter than that
This beef isn't beef,
It's hardley even part of a snack,
I always eat the largest piece,
I'll never be a part of the pack....
You get defeated easily,
I run this game bare foot,
If yous a werewolf,
....I'm a wolf killer,
I skin em, and wear wolf
You don't just suck dick,
You nutt-lick,
Butt-fuck, and butt kiss,
with puckered up front lips
What are you, slim shady?
All you do is pick on ladies,
Soon and I come in play,
All he do is scream get away from me..
What is he's too gay,
or wait, maybe he's too lazy...
or maybe it isn't him...
...maybe it's me...
Maybe I'm to good for him,
Look at him, he's afraid of me...
quit making me, angry,
playing he's, gonna fight me...
and quit saying that I'm an asshole,
when you know I'm just a high-knee (hiney)
....laugh.....you prolly didn't get it, let me wait while you rewind me...
until your realizing,
that "hiney" can mean an ass, or high knee, when its rising....ready to whip ass..
...You see cuz, since I was knee- high,
....I've been making these rhymes...
and I'm lyrically at a speed I'm,
speaking as I'm thinking,
and not to be a behind....
butt everything I'm saying,
is leaving the beat behind...
I'm light speed, my mind, might be, de-scribed,
as as kamikaze as a bee defending bee-hives..
So who you fixed to beat up,
With ur little weenie, and your itty bitty nutts,
Is that a penis or a peanut?
You see cuz,
His dick's so small he can pee on his nutts,
Andre,
this is gonna be a long day,
I was the wrong doOd and this was the wrong day,
It only takes a millisecond to connect this long chain/
of sentences, ..but you been sitting here all day/
Tryin to get cold on your rap,
But the polar bears back...
You already de-feet'd
and hoping it grows back..
Ain't no way you can hold the solar flare back,
I'm a nuclear bomb rappin makin chairs fold back
I'm such a fuckin pimp brah,
You lucky that I'm married,
or else I'd go and go and kiss your sista,
but only on the cheek,
just enough to get you pissed cuz,
If I took her on a date,
her face would get stuck on my zippa'
L-O-L, I'm just kiddin bro,
ay yo, L-M-A-O, Remember yo,
sitting there gettin pissed
Who's decision it was to flow..

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[Trimss]

"started playin on a track, and got run over by a train,"

That was pretty dope if you ask me lol.

[Cobo Black]

"started playin on a track, and got run over by a train,"

That was pretty dope if you ask me lol.

Hahahaha....Thanks. Its funny, when you rap, its more like you discover things, more than create them. Sometimes I freestyle on auto pilot and almost just listen to myself. My favorite lines was probably "if you a were-wolf, then I'm a wolf killer, I skin 'em and wear wolf". Or the "Is that a penis or a peanut, his dick's so small, he can pee on his nutts" lol.

I literally lol'd when I wrote it.

[TripleNineThree]

Hey man, read the rules before posting. You must post a valid link of feedback before you post your music. PM me a link and I will unlock your topic.

[Cobo Black]

Any feed back would be good and FYI, I have a call out for battle here

viewtopic.php?f=33&t=148353

^ If anyone wants to come have some fun =) This board needs to get pumping man, its gets dead sometimes. Lets go have some fun!

[Block]

I smell something fishy... Every person that posted here (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WbwzUJOEXms&feature=plcp) on this video, has done NOTHING else except post on your video. Not only that, but they signed up that SAME day that they posted. Coincidence? I think not.

and in this video (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=37CAOWZaDnM&feature=plcp) the only person replying on your behalf is the same bitch (holly) who replied to your first video. Plus, she (you) mentioned a line that you bit from warbux. (dick so small he can piss on his nuts) I'm sure there's other shit you bit, but I can't be bothered listening to anything else because you're terrible.



Why would you create multiple accounts and leave comments on your own video? Hmm? Why would you bite someone else's shit? Hmm? The jury is waiting for your reply, fool.

[Block]

Is this a troll? Your friend who supposedly doesn't rap is 10x better than you, and you supposedly 'grew up rapping'? His flow shits on your whispering and off-beat terrible nonsense.

Mind = Blown.

[Spyder]

im not arguing on the validity of his account

but that piss on your testicles line is like the oldest joke in the book
to say warbux wrote that first, is just wrong

now if he said it word for word copy then ok, but otherwise is just a corny overused line lol

[ImANoob]

ive been on youtube since 2008 so i kinda know what im doing. you view botted using the mobile device glitch and then made a few accounts to comment on/like your own videos with. theres no way it has 20,000 views, 8 likes and 7 comments.