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Eedee - "Dead To Me" [Week 2]

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Eedee - "Dead To Me" [Week 2]

Postby Eedee » Oct 12th, '12, 23:27

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WEEK 2 OF 8



I don't always do something like this
But you crossed the line...
You brought this on yourself.

Fuck. You. Bitch.


[Verse]
I'm sick of playing games, chasing rays and staying straight
This bitch has made me say it, ain't it lame I'm straying lanes?
But guess what? ... I know where I'm going,
I don't really need you ain't it dope that I show it?
I'm catching the next bus out of this hell-hole,
You're good at spelling things out so how do you spell "ho"?
The bell tolls but there's no saving you now,
Your belly's turning yellow there's no playing it down.
Spreading shit about me, bitch, I'll spread you like shit,
Getting bred in your lies, I'm getting bread in this bitch.
You must be fucking jelly I do whatever I please,
While you're bending your knees to a God that never agrees.
You better believe that I won't take this with a grain of salt,
I'll destroy you with my words so bad you'd think that this was brain assault.
I'll filet your skull, but you ain't off the hook,
If you were dying right next to me, I'd walk by and not even stop to look.


[Chorus]
You don't even deserve a fucking chorus...
You know why? Ha...
You know exactly why.
The emptiness where my words should go?
Is what I feel in my heart for you.
Fuck you.


[Verse]
Your words are just stuff I eat.
You don't want to fuck with me.
Bitch you are the reason I
Did not try to even die.
What-you-mean-to-me just used to be,
I woke up from fruitful dreams.
Grew to see your evil ways
I didn't listen to what people say
They were like "Eric hey, you're not happy with her"
I didn't see it then but I was crappy and hurt.
You came into my life, I didn't call for a witch,
"You need a better boyfriend" man, your mom is a bitch!
I see it rubbed off, and that's not outta line,
SHE said that bullshit, wasn't shot outta mine!
All the shit you said to me, fuck it, it's next to be
cleared out of my head, it's free, Jordan, you're dead to me.
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Re: Eedee - "Dead To Me" [Week 2]

Postby Eedee » Oct 13th, '12, 03:24

Geno wrote:If this is about a real girl, and this actually happened, show it to her and tell me what she says lmao.

I liked it. I thought the 2nd verse was way more exciting to listen to. Very cool the way you pulled that off, especially that part going fast with the drums.

"You need a better boyfriend" man, your mom is a bitch!"

I lol'd @ this. ^ haha


Thanks man! Everything in this is real, and is about a real girl. She found it on my Eedee Facebook page and texted me for the first time in a while saying "Please don't use my name on your songs" :laughing:
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Re: Eedee - "Dead To Me" [Week 2]

Postby Eedee » Oct 13th, '12, 03:34

Geno wrote:LOL

Make a song titled "Jordan" ft. Geno and I'll do audio just for you to rape the bitch on it.

:shifty:


Nah, this song was basically me finally closing that bullshit chapter of my life to open up a new chapter and being able to finally get on with my relationships, which may or may not be what next week's track is about. :coffee:

But if your first audio track was a collab with me, I'd be honored. :y:
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Re: Eedee - "Dead To Me" [Week 2]

Postby Eedee » Oct 13th, '12, 03:37

Geno wrote:Hit up Ego if you ever need to dump a body. We're kind of veterans of doing that now. :smoking:

Haha but yeah I know what you mean. I hate my ex-girlfriend too and it's best to just move on.


Yeah, I mean despite everything she's done to me and all this bullshit she's put me through, I respect her wishes enough to not use her name anymore... but that doesn't mean I won't make another track ABOUT her. Hehe. Minds can change... :shifty:
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Re: Eedee - "Dead To Me" [Week 2]

Postby TripleNineThree » Oct 13th, '12, 05:58

First of all, this beat starts out sick. I love the way the synths sound..

Wow, your flow comes in hard, I love the way you start this song. Your delivery is really good, I can hear your emotion on this song and it fits the beat/topic really well. Your music is getting much better, this song is really sick, the mixing is superb on it. The echoes on the beginning and the echoes on the "chorus" sound really good and well placed. The way you start the second verse is sick, you stay with the beat the entire time with the choppy sound, that was great!!!

Anyways man, this song is solid!
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Re: Eedee - "Dead To Me" [Week 2]

Postby Eedee » Oct 13th, '12, 07:33

^ Oh hell yeah. Triple said my mixing was superb!! Haha, that's a freakin' honor to hear. I'm dead serious. Thanks for feed, man.

Yeah, I love echoes on rap songs. They sound so awesome haha. Hopefully the last 6 will sound as good as this :)
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Re: Eedee - "Dead To Me" [Week 2]

Postby mdemaz » Oct 17th, '12, 01:48

I think the lyrics stood out a lot more then your flow and voice; I'm digging this new approach vocally and musically.

Tbh, you needed a change.
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