Hai there, this is the second time that I record myself, I think that I did fine this time, rhymed pretty well, but your opinions are important, any kind of feedback is welcomed whether it's positive or negative, I prefer to hear the truth and use it to improve myself.
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Link: http://soundcloud.com/tomer666/my-names-tomer
Lyrics:
Hai kids, my name's Tomer
I bet ya'll don't wanna see me 'cause I'm a stoner
Don't be cocky to me just 'cause you are the owner
I can still kick an ounce in the spot
Get a bitch to lick me on the spot
And still won't get boner
Ya'll gonna like this shit 'cause my flow's doper
Than Em in his tour bus, plus tell that chick to give me a long buss
I can still kill a beat without the need to make a strong fuss
How's my flow? You like it? "Hell yeah it gives me goose bumps"
It gives chicks the need to get their loose bums