El Shaddai [Lyrics]

[TripleNineThree]

Hey guys, this is a song that I recently did with a local rapper. I think you guys will like my lyrics, I'm still experimenting with different rhyme schemes and hopefully it sounds more complex; let me know!

EDIT The beat was also produced by Steve Swisher

LoF - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=149848&p=2015926#p2015926

Song - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AY2sZBl7 ... ature=plcp

Chorus (TripleNineThree)
Yeah homie we gonn lift His name on high
We keep flowin' He's the reason that we rhyme
So let's show em that we stay up on our grind
To bring glory to the King yeah El Shaddai
(X2)

Verse 1 (TripleNineThree)
Yeah, see we ain't spittin' so you seein' us
We got that seed in us screaming out He's enough

Yeah we have been bought He's redeeming us
So we Kill the flesh, leave it in the dust

We've been santified by the text plus the Holy Spirit
We're flowin' lyrics, so go and hear it

Jesus gave us clearance to approach the Throne of Grace
I got a new appearance now I'm trying to show his face

To everybody that I see in this broken place
That we call planet earth because they need the Lamb

But they don't see it and I don't wanna leave em damned
So I hit my knees and pray, they meet the Son of Man

Verse 2 (Steve Swisher)
I told my homie hit the button, let me drop a line or two
The things I say into the mic will get my granny so confused

Somethin goin on they know it, guess it's time to break the news
Swisher rockin makin tunes with TripNineThree we makin moves

You feel that snare drum keep smackin you?
Wake up and take a stand, plant a seed and watch it bloom

I read what Jesus told us in 9 twenty-three of Luke
Take up your cross and follow Me so this is what I'm doin

My beats still blowin up the speakers yes, I'm tryna follow Jesus
Study everything He teaches, loving God, loving people

God gave me this gift of music the least I can do is give it back
Goin hard for the King of kings until I die now that's a fact

[Eedee]

Beat: Felt frantic. I liked it a lot.

Lyrics: You're experimenting with new rhyme schemes and longer chains of rhymes, which sounds GREAT. Steve had interesting lyrics but didn't feel as natural as yours...

Delivery: As always, great. You have great intonation when it comes to conveying emotion. Steve's voice is a bit too low or something, it sounds forced.

Mixing: As always, great, again haha. Not much else to say about that. Great echoes and some great delay effects on your verse. You have a knack for mixing.

Solid track, keep pumping out new ones, dude. You're getting better and better.

Mind returning the feed: here?

[B.A.D.]

Well holy crap, Its maybe been a long time since I heard you, cuz this delivery is 100% different from what I remember from you, this is quite nice, I actually like it a lot. Fancy a collab?

Yeah man, I liked the hook. The mixing is a little weird, but not bad, maybe just the overall volume is too high. I didnt like Steve Swisher a lot, hahaha Idk what to say about him.

but yeah man, good stuff, good energy, liked it!

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks for the feedback man - I'm glad you enjoyed my delivery!! And for sure, PM me the concept of a song you want me to do and I'll let you know!

[Tomer666]

Liked it a lot! The beat is not exactly my type but you fit it so good! Keep posting here regularly!