Crazy Sycho "The Crazy Man's Here"

[The Candy Man]

YouTube

Just a quick song I recorded. Figured I'd start posting these here.
Tell me what you think.

[Eedee]

You sound very timid delivery wise, your flow/rhymes were pretty dope though. I liked it for what it was.

You need a link of feed to post songs, by the way.

[RainMan44]

This wasn't bad. I can see what you were aiming for, and you actually didn't execute it too bad. The rhymes at some points were above average, but you could've been more consistent with it. The flow was dope, and I loved the whole 'slipping into different character's' voices. I liked the chorus, too. It had a eerie aas feel to it when you said "the crazy man's hereee..."

Haha

Overall, not bad...but with a little revising, and with more passion/intensity put into the delivery, it will make it just that much better. But I definitely dig this drop, good ass shit man. Keep pushing!


Mind feeding mine? I'm on the first verse.

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[Tash8]

wicked beat to say the least

your delivery, i wouldn't call timid, i think u meant to make it like this, its horror-like and it fits the beat, but I do think u need to work on changing the pitch of your voice here and there; it makes the delivery more interesting. I like the song, it's very different than what i usually hear around here. good work