The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

Crazy Sycho "The Crazy Man's Here"

The forum for TRshady family audio songs and albums / mixtapes.

Crazy Sycho "The Crazy Man's Here"

Postby The Candy Man » Nov 8th, '12, 21:14

YouTube

Just a quick song I recorded. Figured I'd start posting these here.
Tell me what you think.
MY RAP MUSIC:
YouTube Twitter MySpace

What's that on the seat?

CUSTOM MUSTARD STAIN

Menzo wrote:2012 better fuckin' happen.
User avatar
The Candy Man
Closet Cleaner
Closet Cleaner
 
Posts: 53
Joined: Dec 7th, '11, 03:44
Location: US
Gender: Male

Re: Crazy Sycho "The Crazy Man's Here"

Postby Eedee » Nov 8th, '12, 23:17

You sound very timid delivery wise, your flow/rhymes were pretty dope though. I liked it for what it was.

You need a link of feed to post songs, by the way.
Image
mdemaz wrote:dam
User avatar
Eedee
Eye-Raping-Fudgepop
Eye-Raping-Fudgepop
 
Posts: 11719
Joined: Aug 7th, '11, 06:11
Location: Free food
Gender: Male

Re: Crazy Sycho "The Crazy Man's Here"

Postby RainMan44 » Nov 9th, '12, 07:30

This wasn't bad. I can see what you were aiming for, and you actually didn't execute it too bad. The rhymes at some points were above average, but you could've been more consistent with it. The flow was dope, and I loved the whole 'slipping into different character's' voices. I liked the chorus, too. It had a eerie aas feel to it when you said "the crazy man's hereee..."

Haha

Overall, not bad...but with a little revising, and with more passion/intensity put into the delivery, it will make it just that much better. But I definitely dig this drop, good ass shit man. Keep pushing! :y:


Mind feeding mine? I'm on the first verse.

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=150350
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




GOAT
Image
User avatar
RainMan44
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1093
Joined: Nov 21st, '10, 08:51
Location: CA
Gender: Male

Re: Crazy Sycho "The Crazy Man's Here"

Postby Tash8 » Nov 9th, '12, 23:22

wicked beat to say the least

your delivery, i wouldn't call timid, i think u meant to make it like this, its horror-like and it fits the beat, but I do think u need to work on changing the pitch of your voice here and there; it makes the delivery more interesting. I like the song, it's very different than what i usually hear around here. good work
User avatar
Tash8
Addict
Addict
 
Posts: 12522
Joined: Feb 19th, '07, 20:04
Gender: Male


Return to Audio Stage



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users