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Always

Postby Tash8 » Nov 14th, '12, 00:52

I have a tape done that I'll be posting soon, but for now... - Tam

'Always'
http://www.hulkshare.com/9lutqvfobsw0

Sorry about the noise at the beginning, I hope you can ignore that.


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Re: Always

Postby classthe_king » Nov 14th, '12, 01:01

I love it, will check the tape for sure
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Re: Always

Postby ray k-47 » Nov 14th, '12, 01:05

I like dis a lot.. Im pretty sure your tape is gonna crazy also
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Re: Always

Postby Tash8 » Nov 14th, '12, 21:35

I appreciate it guys! thank you
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Re: Always

Postby Eedee » Nov 14th, '12, 22:01

I like the vibe of this track. You had a nice flow going on, really rode the beat.

The chorus felt raw, but the melody was great. :y:

I ignored the noise at the beginning haha. :shifty: This was a nice track; I can appreciate this.
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Re: Always

Postby Tash8 » Nov 15th, '12, 03:44

haha, thanks man
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Re: Always

Postby Ticalrecords » Nov 17th, '12, 18:20

i like ya flow bruh, it be smooth. idk if i loved the hook, but i could listen to it again. overall pretty good.

mind returning teh favor?
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Re: Always

Postby Boston617 » Nov 25th, '12, 23:03

i can dig it. hook is catchy. i think vocals can be louder at points but good shit. glad to see ya doin ya thing still.
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Re: Always

Postby TripleNineThree » Nov 26th, '12, 16:05

Your lyrics are extremely good. The way you start out flowing sounds really good. I enjoyed the way you doubled up your parts - it made it sound more professional. Your mixing is actually quite good. I would highly recommend saving up for a new mic. Your mixing and rapping is good but I feel that your mic holds you back. The quality there is lacking. Besides that, this is a solid track. Keep it up fam!
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Re: Always

Postby Kez » Nov 28th, '12, 02:26

Glad you never gave up on music, I remember when you used to talk about not being into it. I still remember the shit you produced for my album that time which was awesome, did you produce this as well? Cause it sounds a lot lot better.

Your flow and delivery has gotten much better, you used to sometimes eat up some of your words with your breathing in cause you were running out, that's signifcantly been cut down. The flow stays on point pretty much all through the verses, there's no big pauses where you have to stop for a second which is also something that you used to do. I can hear more character in your voice as well. The lyrics fit the beat's vibe, still making that more chilled out kind of shit. Which is why it was nice to give a couple listens to but won't be something i'll re-listen to a whole lot to be honest. Not my thing. Don't like the accent singing on the chorus though if that's you, just don't like how it sounds. Personal preference.

I'll try to check your tape out when it comes, but I have a lot of shit going on so don't hold your breath.
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Re: Always

Postby Vettori » Nov 30th, '12, 00:40

Hmm, As a song I like it. But it seems to have a choppyness. very hard for me to explain. I don't think the beat choice was good. You had fun on this. But it seemed a little odd. I'd like to hear something else from you. :) Iv'e heard better from you IMO
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Re: Always

Postby Tash8 » Dec 2nd, '12, 11:20

thanks for the responses guys, I appreciate. I hear ya, this is a weird sound, it was a random track I had
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