Our First Song

[Ticalrecords]

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we don't have a group name yet, but we recorded a ten minute freestyle, i'm the only one in the group that claims to be a rapper loll but fuck it. we thought it was funny so we gon release a whole mixtape of this style. its a true freestyle, absolutely no thought was put into the rhymes - its actually the working title for the mixtape. anyways, this is the first one we recorded - all original beats and whatnot.


http://soundcloud.com/ahddub/our-first-song

EDIT: i forgot to say that my homie LP did the adlibs but that too was the first take - so all of it is still a freestyle loll

[Eedee]

Um... this was cringe-worthy. The adlibs were terrible, way too loud and shitty quality. You didn't even rhyme? I barely heard any rhymes...

The first beat was annoying as fuck too. I listened to the whole thing but I have to say it hurt me to do so.

Is that second dude black? Because otherwise he has no business saying the N word...

Second beat was better. Not as annoying. Kinda cool. You wanted to attack the first beat? But you had your chance and didn't. Oh well.

Third beat I've heard before, Passion Hifi right? Anyway, not much better on the freestyle side of things.

This was whole thing felt like a mess. I know it was just for fun, but you should've kept it tucked away, ya know? Oof.

[Slim Fiasco]

All I can say is that you should definitely keep up with the freestyle sessions. It's like the best way to practice your flow and also you can only get better with time. As for the content and complexity, don't really worry about it, it's understandable for a freestyle not to be really coherent. You can check the link in my tutorial for a more in-depth advices.