Chase (robbery follow on)

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 29th, '07, 16:13

its actually pretty sick man :worship:

its got real good flow :8)

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 29th, '07, 16:15

Killa wrote:idk ...after spending since then improving i think u get to a point u dislike most of your older stuff. i think its diffrent from a listerners prespective tho. u may drop a old track and hate it but i might liike it if u get me.

yeh coz you notice all the stuff you could have did better, im that way :sweating:

by **mart85** » Jan 29th, '07, 17:07

lol yeah, I think everybody is like that...

but this was actually not that bad lol, like bar said, the flow was nice at some point :happy:

by **B.A.D.** » Jan 29th, '07, 17:19

wow... this is the kinda tracks I like
..

nice, really kept me in deep...

great job, i liked this one... didn't sound bad to me

by **mart85** » Jan 29th, '07, 17:23

yeah I guess that's a sign that you improve and you're aware of what your flaws were (or still are), so that's good I guess lol...

by **Speech** » Jan 29th, '07, 20:48

thatz old? :confusion:

soundz like a tight ass track to me, beat was tight as fuck

lyrickz tight as fuck

SONG tight as fuck :8)

by **Coccoa** » Jan 29th, '07, 21:21

Imma try give u an unbiased opinion on this.

by **Coccoa** » Jan 29th, '07, 21:40

Killa wrote:
Coccoa wrote:Imma try give u an unbiased opinion on this.

that wiill never happen but you can give it your best shot

I expected that kind of answer....lemme listen to that. It is on zshare i hope.

by **Coccoa** » Jan 29th, '07, 21:48

Riiiight. Well...Robbery had a haunting beat and even if u was off beat all the time, the manslaughter rhymes that reminded a gravediggaz-grime UK crossover made up the song. "The ground is smoking like crack fiends" was memorable.

Now on this case, we got a faster tempo, not so haunting melody, sounds sumthin Prodigy would like to spoil. The rhymes are ok, the topic is turned from a robbery to a manchase, not much of bloodshed here, gun talk and of course chasing. The flow seems fixed becuz of the speed of the instrumental, the accent kept the same and frankly, it is a big con, for it completely kids any seriousness of the lyrics (dont know if it is deliberate).

On frequencies now...i wont say much but the lack of high and med frequencies makes it sound more like a live performance than a studio R.S. Suggest: notch filter the 50HZ, amplify on 500HZ and 1-2kHZ and de-amp the low frequencies from 200HZ to 40. Whatever.

by **Coccoa** » Jan 29th, '07, 21:51

Silver star.

by **$0 R3@L** » Jan 29th, '07, 23:27

great flow,i heard sum gr8 lines in there too man

.Shame there was no hook and it was so short....other then that i cant fault it.Gr8 job

by **AspirinE** » Jan 31st, '07, 10:41

dope, fuck a hook.

i always more appreciate plain rap.

by **Mc Cubz** » Jan 31st, '07, 12:13

nice track gkilla, the harlem diss track is still my fav from you. I like the beat actually on this.

Positive: lyrics: complex, inetesting and tell a story which I can follow
Constructive: maybe try saying slightly less per bar so its easier for you to rap more clearly and us to hear it. Also maybe project your voice more if you can, not necessarily shouting, but dont hold back, (these are also my problems in certain tracks)

I hope this helps you killa (and others)

Overall nice track I like these type of tracks by you, please make some more, and I am really looking forward to hearing our tape.

Chase (robbery follow on)

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