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Postby Call Me Pik » Feb 16th, '07, 21:31

aight i been in a crisis kuz i cant choose which song to put down on the demo as my solo forgive me or this song its called why i think this song explains more about my life but forgive me more about a specific subject gimme some feedback and pik which one i shud put on the demo

Forgive me Vs. Why

get at me

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Postby Vettori » Feb 16th, '07, 21:56

I like this song here...very melodic instrumental...But i dont think it was used to its best...You can do better :P

Ill say the other one ...Forgive me
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Postby yoshi » Feb 16th, '07, 21:58

they're both awesome, personally i liked Forgive Me more than Why [btw. i liked that moment where you added part of King's speech :D] - dunno why tho.. :sweating: if i were you, i'd put Forgive Me, but yeah.. it's up to you lol :p :flower:
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Postby Vettori » Feb 16th, '07, 21:59

And i preffered the third verse of why lol....I no for a fact yu can do better..Put more focus into it..You seem like a gentle guy that puts up with alot when i hear ur music lol it's cool
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Postby Call Me Pik » Feb 16th, '07, 22:09

thnks for the feedback faith n yoshi so far its 2-0 forgive me

big decision that is prolly goin to rely on the feedbak ur givin me

so uppin
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Postby yoshi » Feb 16th, '07, 22:13

yayayay Faith, 2 - 0 for us lol :smoking:
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Postby Vettori » Feb 16th, '07, 22:33

If i smoked id join u...But Ill say woot for it anyways :D "il whistkle instead" :whistle: and send flowers :flower: and puzzle myself wtf im talkin about :confusion: and pce :wave:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 16th, '07, 23:38

fogive me is one of the best tracks drop on this site in a while apart form so reals and asps , forgive me over why :happy: good to see someone coming to the site dropping and getting involved ad being good, not happened in a bit lol
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Postby Call Me Pik » Feb 17th, '07, 00:14

aight so its forgive me 3-0 hmmm pretty much one sided so far i'll make it the first to 5 and make my decision thnks fah the feedback an im honored that u think that bar thnks uppin
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Postby Slimm » Feb 17th, '07, 01:03

I loved why..

They were both great, but i liked the instrumental on why more (from what song is that again?) Loved the chorus.. U dont hear alot of rappers on the internet really letting everything go on the mic, and thats what i like..

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Postby Call Me Pik » Feb 17th, '07, 01:13

aight thnks slimm thats whut my man says 2 about why so its still a toss up 3-1 get at me

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