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Befriended- Faith (unfinished)

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Befriended- Faith (unfinished)

Postby Vettori » Feb 17th, '07, 04:41

ok the quality on this blows so much ass its not funny...But this is a serius trck, about a friend of mine...It's the risks im willing to take fo him to quit doin drugs....

http://www.zshare.net/audio/befriended- ... 3-gt9.html

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The saving process fucked up and only put the chorus in once....and i know guys teh qualitys garbage...Ill post lyrics in a moment for those who wont be able to understand


Verse 1:

I need clarification, theres no drug in the world worth takin
If it takes me to befriend yu so you quit ill Learn how to face it
be brave kid is all i tell myself breakin shit in my basement
Feelin the downfall of a cycle pryer Im faceless
How i feel im just concerned all these years that ive learned
self tought how to earn my own dollars but not to watch your life burn
i cant settle to see me watch it, gotta take some quick actions
Dont need my help as you say but the problems are stackin
an asset how come you never asked take charge of ur actions
Actin like everythings fine, yet yu fail all of ur classes
all addin up Ive lost one friend I wont suffer from it again
Call me emotionally challenged ill admit some times i get in
But i can face day to day shit. With the guidence of friends
It tends to get harder down the road sayin things never meant
Sent on to do our things that seperate are time speant..
Cement is exactly what i feel feels like the world is ement
feels like the world isnt meant to be caried on
I feel responsibility is needed shits gettin scary for some
We look past it every day thinkin all parents are wrong
We passed judgement for to long,Are words should be strong Cmon

Chorus:

Cause we Express it differant nobody's ever gonna get it,
Forget it, Better to Leave it i guess, a definate worth defendin
I fend in ur cause. I belive were commin out strong
We were kids a long time ago I think it's time to move on

Hook under chorus:

The worlds turnin on me
It's not what i want
It's just what i see
the worlds turnin on me
on me
on me X2
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Postby Vettori » Feb 17th, '07, 05:29

If the quality was clearer i think ud like it...It wa hard to make it sound good on that shit quality..Thx for the feed...
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 17th, '07, 14:04

yeh nice track man, a pity it couldnt be longer :( and yeh quality annoyed me a little in this one :sweating: but none the less lyric were good and deep, flow was great as usual :worship:
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Postby Vettori » Feb 17th, '07, 20:08

Thx alot
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Postby mart85 » Feb 17th, '07, 20:52

I agree with bar... I like the lyrics, good meaning... and I wasn'T really feeling the hook under the chorus either but I think with better quality it would make a huge difference...nice job
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Postby Vettori » Feb 17th, '07, 21:49

thx
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Re: Befriended- Faith (unfinished)

Postby Vettori » Feb 17th, '07, 22:00

Thx alot guys...Heres the version with the double chorus...i figured out why it saved wrong....redload if ud like thx

http://www.zshare.net/audio/befriended- ... 3-gt9.html
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Postby Vettori » Feb 17th, '07, 23:20

Bump
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