Check some of my shit..

[primos]

Iight well im from an real all rap battling/Open mic/Audio site and i came here... for... fuck i dont know.. just to check it..
check me out, I got 4 songs..they aint bad quality but it aint the best..

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default ... dID=751920

[Kez]

Well, don't understand why you got just the American Psycho beat uploaded..it aint yours.

Don't Know What To Do:
Beat's alright
Bad quality, hard to hear, i hear popping of the mic.
Flow is a bit off at some times, some times it's okay
Delivery is too quiet too
Rhymes are decent

10 Bars:
Flow is alright in this at times, sometimes falls off a few times
A few decent lines, rhymes alright
Delivery needs to be fiercer for this typa track
Not much for the beat
Quality's alright through most of this, i heard a couple pops though

Mushroom Ingestion:
Beat is okay
Real bad quality on this, whether its your vocals or too loud a beat there's a lot of buzzing, and still some pops
Flow is okay
Delivery sounds bored, whether that fits the track or not it dont matter because you sounded the same on the other tracks
Hook is okay but definately needs to stand out more than the verses
Some decent rhymes

I'll review the last one in a bit

[primos]

dude american psychos is on there cause me and two other people from rap dogs are ganna do a collab on it, and they needed the download... I dont know where you heared popping dude, i replayed all of em and didnt hear it... and mushroon ingestion is supposed to sound bored...its a song about mushrooms... but anyway... Uppin...

[Mc Cubz]

10 Bars:
Flow is alright in this at times, sometimes falls off a few times
A few decent lines, rhymes alright
Delivery needs to be fiercer for this typa track
Not much for the beat
Quality's alright through most of this, i heard a couple pops though

i agree with Kez this cud of bin arite this one, like u open quite strong but then start to chew up words like a starved hannibal lector at the sight of JLs pootang!

do u produce this as well the 2nd track (after american pysco sounds like a tune i alredy head but not exactly the same, I duno?

ur arite man, id work abit on pronunciation and rhythm tho

[Kez]

10 Bars:
Flow is alright in this at times, sometimes falls off a few times
A few decent lines, rhymes alright
Delivery needs to be fiercer for this typa track
Not much for the beat
Quality's alright through most of this, i heard a couple pops though

i agree with Kez this cud of bin arite this one, like u open quite strong but then start to chew up words like a starved hannibal lector at the sight of JLs pootang!

do u produce this as well the 2nd track (after american pysco sounds like a tune i alredy head but not exactly the same, I duno?

ur arite man, id work abit on pronunciation and rhythm tho

The American Psycho tune is a D12 beat Cubz

[primos]

iight thanks, yeah man im ganna re-do 10 barz on another beat and add a verse.

Uppin..

[Wonderbread]

I listened to the first two on there. I have used a few beats by them myself. I heard the popping the other guy was talking about too. The lyrics sound cool to me but then It's like you just throw something in that rhymes cuz you couldn't think of anything else. I think you should try to flow more instead of spittin a line then pausing then another line, pause. I think you might do what I do sometimes and try to rush through a song cuz you want to finish it. It usually sounds better if you take your time.