Mind Is Corrupt

[dbeauluvswomen]

I haven't been on here in a while, my computers been down. In the mean time I bought a new mic which is actually worse than my last one lol. So the quality will sound different. I haven't got around to record anything until today.

"Mind Is Corrupt" - http://www.zshare.net/audio/68274132395d18/

[Speech]

haha aye this is great i enjoyed it..sounds like some Jedi Mind Tricks thing, the way you rhyme...like a lighter vinnie paz hahaha...fuck this was cool...uhm...what to complain idk...i liked this..with some studio shit you could do a great tape / album....fresh stuff...maybe the chorus sounds a lil rushed to me but thatz me idk...cool shit 9.0/10 cool
keep that up

[dbeauluvswomen]

Appreciate the feed Speech! I've never heard of Jedi Mind Tricks..I'm going to check them out. Yeah I'm working with no studio equipment, but I try to make it sound best..and honestly the chorus was rushed..I can only think of good ones on rare occasions and I wanted to get the song over with cuz I had already recorded the verses. Thanks

[DelinQuent]

it sounds like your not doing any dubs/overlays/whateverthefuckyoumightcallthem lol. the 2nd verse seemed off flow at the start. the first verse was completely solid. it's kind of hard to understand exactly what you're saying because you're rhyming so much. great work tho.

[dbeauluvswomen]

it sounds like your not doing any dubs/overlays/whateverthefuckyoumightcallthem lol. the 2nd verse seemed off flow at the start. the first verse was completely solid. it's kind of hard to understand exactly what you're saying because you're rhyming so much. great work tho.

You're right..I'm not doing any dubs/overlays/whateverthefuckyoumightcallthem. I did at first, but I thought it sounded better without and I just didn't feel like it anyway. Yeah, see with the second verse I start it while the end of the chorus is still running..so the first word/s of my second verse blends in and throws you off. I felt that way at first, but after a few listens it was all good. Same goes for my rhyming..even though I know my lyrics sometimes I have trouble understanding what I'm saying lol. But after a few listens it kicks in. I suppose it's because I just recorded it and the first listen comes off that way. Mainly the line where I say "gates are fencing me off, denied to enter my carcass no comprehension I'm thoughtless cuz I've been sent to the heartless" at the end of the first verse. Appreciate at it

[Nu Syd]

haha aye this is great i enjoyed it..sounds like some Jedi Mind Tricks thing, the way you rhyme...like a lighter vinnie paz hahaha...fuck this was cool...uhm...what to complain idk...i liked this..with some studio shit you could do a great tape / album....fresh stuff...maybe the chorus sounds a lil rushed to me but thatz me idk...cool shit 9.0/10 cool
keep that up

co-sign this, first song ive heard from you to, great work.

[Tash8]

man stop using other rappers beat, this beat's song is one my favorite ever and i have to compare it to you...

u did good, u need better quality!!!! but overall good job man, need better mixing!

[dbeauluvswomen]

man stop using other rappers beat, this beat's song is one my favorite ever and i have to compare it to you...

u did good, u need better quality!!!! but overall good job man, need better mixing!

Thank you Nu Syd!

Which rapper uses that beat? Or are you talking about yourself already have used this beat? I just ran across it on Soundclick yesterday. My fault though, I'll make sure to make better decisions when chosing next go around but thanks. Yeah..qualitys terrible, but I've accepted it to this point.

[IceAxe]

I actually think the vocal quality helped. It added to the vibe of the song, for me at least. uhh... the only thing I'd say you could improve on is the chorus and maybe a better sound for the gun in the third verse lol.

With some studio quality equipment you could do some sick shit, keep it up

[dbeauluvswomen]

I actually think the vocal quality helped. It added to the vibe of the song, for me at least. uhh... the only thing I'd say you could improve on is the chorus and maybe a better sound for the gun in the third verse lol.

With some studio quality equipment you could do some sick shit, keep it up

You know it's funny because I thought the same thing about how the vocal production came off on this beat. I thought it helped out also. It's nice to know someone else thinks the same ..but now I don't want to record anymore songs because I don't want them all sounding like that. This was just a luck of the draw. Haa..you are right about the gun noise..I just found one that's perfect, much better..amd I think I will work on the chorus since I threw it together in a minute. Thank you

[Vettori]

Not bad, i enjoyed it a bit, i do see a few things you could touch up on, to make ur flow sound nuts...U kept it basic at some parts where i thought you coulda came in with a flow that knocked me off my seat, but it stayed basic...Ur vocabs good... and ur Wordplays close...But your Metaphors are fairly weak... Im basing it on from what i hear that thats ur style of rhyming....But overall Some more work and better quality ( which wasnt half bad), You got something good goin for you...take some more time, youll enjoy the outcome alot more

[dbeauluvswomen]

Not bad, i enjoyed it a bit, i do see a few things you could touch up on, to make ur flow sound nuts...U kept it basic at some parts where i thought you coulda came in with a flow that knocked me off my seat, but it stayed basic...Ur vocabs good... and ur Wordplays close...But your Metaphors are fairly weak... Im basing it on from what i hear that thats ur style of rhyming....But overall Some more work and better quality ( which wasnt half bad), You got something good goin for you...take some more time, youll enjoy the outcome alot more

I switch up my style of rhyming a lot on different songs, but I appreciate the feed much! I'll keep what you said in mind.

[Tash8]

HAHA SHIT MAN!!! i confused this beat with dancing with the devil, but then i realized that McMaybe used this beat hahaha, my bad

ignore me man, that was my fault

anyways good job man, u got talent, u just need a studio and better mixing.

[Xray]

damn that was a nice enjoyable track. great lyrics and flow and mixing was pretty good we needa colab some time i can see a good track with the combination of us two in 1 track. hit me up if you down.

[Wonderbread]

I already told you that I think it's freakin tight!