Hurt Part 2

[Call Me Pik]

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6230834

the sequel to the first part of the story from dq what do you think?

[Xray]

dayem bro this song is the shit...the emotion in the beat and your voice is absolutely awesome ..lyrics match the track perfect one deep tight crazy song man THIS IS DEFANATELY YOUR BEST TO DATE the mixing is very very great..the outro is greatly deep everything was awesome except i think the song ended too quick..another verse and my ears would of cummed lmao no homo and also give me a download link right now

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

overlays are pretty well done...and emotion was top
good track...just ur voice sounds low idk...but good track man
worth listening

[Vettori]

Definatly your best to date. I liked the outro...annoying part was after the chorus how she faintly was singing...Just didnt fit in...probably the fault of the producer lol....Over all i liked ur delivery, a few of your lyrics didnt seem to fit the topic, and the beat was good too...Keep at it, Once you start gettin better..It takes more effort to go down a level then it does to make a better one...Lookin forward to the next track

PS: if you mastered your voice youd sound pretty sick overall...Just work on a few things maybe some wordplay try kickin to some faster beats

[M-Pyre]

the beat was aight
your enunciation was aight, it seemed like you was bored, but maby thats what you was going for I dono.
try to change your rap style, cause this was just to damn slow or something.
lyrics, seemed pretty simple all tough you flowed it right and you had 2 syllable rhymes, I like multi's
like the chorus allot, but hey it's christina, no wonder

uhm, work on your delivery thats all I got to say, and yeah, a couple of wordplay elements would be dope

keep up the work man

[Call Me Pik]

glad to hear that the overall response is positive...i'm going to try more multis and wordplay next time just never think of it when its a story type song for some reason thanks for listening ...i think im still in the process of finding my rap voice but getting closer each song so keep listening =)

again thnks for listening

[Call Me Pik]

and i'll give yall a dl link hows that sound lol hahaha

[B.A.D.]

LONG TIME NO SEE

wazzup pik!!

yo, this track is amazing, very good... the vocals on the first verse at the very begining are too low, but get ok very fast

the hook I love it

your verses and concept are real real nice, prolly its me but the track is too short

great track, I could also apreciate a download link here

nice to hear from u again

[Call Me Pik]

thnks axe...yeah havent recorded in awhile eventhough i have like 3 or 4 songs finished...once dq finishes his parts there shud be pretty many songs coming your way so stay tuned..and i made a dl link for yall

[Xray]

i made a dl link for yall

cool man ima download it..btw check my new single automatic murder

[Mc Cubz]

nice song man the beat i reli loved esp with the chorus at first i wasnt sure but as u got into it i began to actually listen to wht u were sayin its a nice track uve improved

[B.A.D.]

thnks axe...yeah havent recorded in awhile eventhough i have like 3 or 4 songs finished...once dq finishes his parts there shud be pretty many songs coming your way so stay tuned..and i made a dl link for yall

oh cool can't wait to hear them, u guys is ill

good lookin

ayo, chek out my single "Breathe", hot banga

Album coming Feb 25

[Call Me Pik]

i listened to both track they def crack xray and axe uppin for more feed on this song 2 get at me

[dbeauluvswomen]

beats killa, i like the lady on the hook..you went off though, crazy lyrics ..theres not really one thing i dislike about the track..the echo after the singing was not anything to get me turned around on the song..i mention that cuz thats the only thing i thought about ..just gotta get used to it...keep bringin it