yeah Tash summed it up well... the drum pattern itself was cool, and that bass-y sound was interesting... but the instrument you used in the chorus could be better, and the overall mixing needs work... the beat has potential, but with more "experience" you'll know how to mix better and use better sounds and you'll develop your ear for the melodies... so just keep practising
btw, there's a section to post beats, it's the "studio"
