*NEW HOT TRACKS*

[Rap Dogg]

WHAT UP? haha,i just posted some hot shit i recorded.tell me what you think

dont know me.mp3 - 4.10MB

love you.mp3 - 2.27MB

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Dont know me - some of your flowing at time's and delivery sound alot like eminem, your flow is a little choppy but so if the beat so it works on this track imo, lyrics are simple but you seem to have the idea of rhyming so its basically just practice and you should get better. Chorus is ok it works nothing amazing.

id say you got to try change your delivery coz it does sound like eminem alot man

Love you - again delivery sounds like eminem, flow is alot better on this, and the beat is simple but it works and i actually like it alot. Lyrics are better on this but its probly coz the concept on this is stronger. id say this is better than the first track.

again just try switch your delivery a little so people dont start saying your a eminem wanne-be, got potential though man, flow is there.

btw just out of curiosity, were you from ? lol