Xray wrote:dylated eyes did good on the intro and his/there? parts, you didn't do as well but you did show effort
umm x-ray that was all me no one else was in that song...the only song that dylated eyes is on is
"cold world"
Xray wrote:dylated eyes did good on the intro and his/there? parts, you didn't do as well but you did show effort
Xray wrote:ohh shit my bad, i heard the cold world instead![]()
now checking the other one.
okay in this one you did much better, even the mixing has improvedgood job man, nice little step up
Blind wrote:O'k
Intro good idea, creative but idk something needs to be add, maybe music or a more words but still cool..
Beat is so-so but still good to rap, u good strong flow, but I think you overplay with your emotions, just slow u down a bit and pronouncation all good u american, right? Good to listen. And lyrics cool.
Overall worth track, u got skills but improvement still needs.. Keep it up, I liked it![]()
sticcy z wrote:thanks man i appriciate the feed
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