NEW song profaz ft c-riz-city anthem

[Big Proof 4ever]

aight aight heres brand new song from profaz wit c-riz called city anthem,and finally ill post my lyrics in english so check this shit out ppl
opinions here change more often than Jackson's colour..one day everybody is rappers next day skinheads..walking and looking the same..like a sheep herd..i wouldnt get suprised if you become one victim of them ..streets are filled wit dumb muthafuckas..walking heads looking for solitude sometimes you feel like everything's fake..people act like tigers but they're just sheep..a city where hierarchy is degenerated..weak people in charge no order just anarchy..kids selling drugs feeling very powerful cant resist to big money to sell this shit.but they2re just puppets..they get the orders from the upper part..so stay where you are cuz you'll lose your memory here and wont find your way home..you'll just dig your grave..no chance to run away and you'll die in a closed casket..its 2nd verse

http://www.zshare.net/audio/10747275433c0e79/

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

propz on posting it...already told you what i think
check it people

[Xray]

pretty good song, beat was dark as a motherfucker, the concept went good with it. c-riz's parts were good just the chorus didn't fit the beat 100% and the intro also, and profaz did good aswell, i give it a 7/10 keep it up

[Big Proof 4ever]

pretty good song, beat was dark as a motherfucker, the concept went good with it. c-riz's parts were good just the chorus didn't fit the beat 100% and the intro also, and profaz did good aswell, i give it a 7/10 keep it up

thanks for feedback man

[Speech]

nice lil track but damnit raise the vol on the chorus...liked c-riz's flow...new style ? compared to ya album verses this sounds all changed up...cool...hmm hope you two won't just release city anthems lol..oh and for profaz...nice performance again..the lyrics all cool..hmm...nice one on the jackson line..i dig the lyrics man...100%...only thing messy was the chorus and the intro type thing..not loud enogh and mixed weird..oh well...keep it up..both of you

7 / 10

[Big Proof 4ever]

thanks man we did city anthem cuz my city was wack as hell and bout hook hell yeah its way too quiet and its my fault

[Kez]

Nice dark beat
From C-Riz, some nice rhymes and lyrics
Delivery is much darker, suits the beat
Hook is a bit quiet?
Can't feed Profaz on anything except flow, which sounds good.

[Big Proof 4ever]

damn hook ruined everything thanks for feed man

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

nice beat choice.

bad hook, mixed badly aswell.

c-riz, your clearer in this, you need to make sure you stick to this projection and not fall back to the way it was before. youve attempted complexity but what you've done is force the rhyming to the point it hardly makes sense, its not flowing and it doesnt sound good. delivery is defiantly an improvement, other stuff you still got to get a better understanding of, especially structuring rhymes. also do you say N**** ? around 1:00 on the track, sounds like it, anywae, pronouncation still needs work but its getting better, flow when you werent trying the mad rhyme structure was better.

profaz, flow is sounding rushed at points but overall its a solid flow.

[Big Proof 4ever]

nice beat choice.

bad hook, mixed badly aswell.

c-riz, your clearer in this, you need to make sure you stick to this projection and not fall back to the way it was before. youve attempted complexity but what you've done is force the rhyming to the point it hardly makes sense, its not flowing and it doesnt sound good. delivery is defiantly an improvement, other stuff you still got to get a better understanding of, especially structuring rhymes. also do you say N**** ? around 1:00 on the track, sounds like it, anywae, pronouncation still needs work but its getting better, flow when you werent trying the mad rhyme structure was better.

profaz, flow is sounding rushed at points but overall its a solid flow.

thanks for checkin it man

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx guyz yeah hook was my bad oh well
and thx again..i was trying a new style...tryna step up aka goin in a new direction
thx bar....but i dont say the n-word ..argh my pronouncation