DUMBLEDORE RAP!!!!!

[Darkblade44431]

haha, just fuckin around. i made this rap a while ago, decided to finally record. though i still cant put a beat in, i had to use the shitty software my comp. gives me to record, which is also why i had stop sometimes during the song. if somebody would please add a beat to fit it, that'd be great.

Heres the link, hopefully this will work. i cant tell cuz my stupid comp. wont play it(its a 98), if it doesnt tell me.
Here:
http://www.soundupload.com/audio/invltjp8ne0imlz

edit: lol, somebody, post something. i got 12 views, no replies.

[Kez]

*rubs hands*

Time to rip into you!

First, no beat. That's just fuckin stupid. It might work as a skit, if not for these other problems
Quality is worse than many people call mine, even. Loads of pops.
The lyrics are just crap, the rhymes are like 1 word rhymes
The hook's just unoriginal "It's Dumbledore Bitch"
The flow can't be judged since there's no beat
And the concept could of been funny but it's really not here.



PS: Since when does Dumbledore go out with 50 Cent and beat people up who play the blues?

[Darkblade44431]

oh my god, i actually had to wait a few minutes. i was laughin my ass off from reading your post. hahahaha, i dont give a fuck. i was just makin it for fun and decided to record it. wasnt tryin to do anything special, and like i said, i dont have any programs or a studio to work in or make a beat. LMFAO!!!!! dude, ur criticism is the best, but i think some of that is cuz ur mad cuz i said ur music was shit, ROFL!!!! HAHAHAHAHAA!!!!! hmm...about that funny thing, maybe i'll make myself have a dif. voice for this song, like an old person voice, thatd be great.
umm, lol...any more comments?

edit:
hahaha, sorry to bug you again, but...u got that one part wrong. he beat up 50 cent, didnt hang with him, just hang around while he was there, and he took the saxaphone from that guy playin the blues to beat 50 cent. idk, maybe that couldve been interpreted dif. ways. lol, i wanna go see your reply to me shitting on your work.

[Kez]

^ my reply?

No, i couldn't be arsed to reply

Other people, it seems, could though.

I can tell by the highly exaggerated "laughs" that you did try on this and you're trying to make out every song you make is a joke, just to avoid and worm your way out of any criticism.

[Darkblade44431]

ok cool!
thank you kez, you made it so my day didnt completely suck, u made me laugh. maybe ill post up more shit for you to post about.
edit:
oh i see where ur tryin to get at. no no no, thats not it at all. lol, i wouldnt do that if it was a song i was actually tryin to make good, even if it wasnt supposed to be serious, if i was tryin to make it good, then i wud take the criticism. are you actually that stupid to think i was tryin to make this good? i was just bored one day and wrote it then i recorded it, jeez, a bit full of urself huh?

[<VerbalTouch>]

host it some place else it wont load for me

[Darkblade44431]

Thanks for tellin me. well, damn, have you tried downloading it?
edit: well i hosted it at a dif. place, but u have to download it. so just try that then.

[<VerbalTouch>]

Noooooooooo motherfucker

DAMN!

I'm thinkin about dissin ou for no reason because of that wait were you in this video

http://youtube.com/watch?v=wSCwAdc4HPY - I maed to this more then that thing

Haha fuck you just ruined your rap career how can you even say dumbeldor fights 50 cent or somethin like that

[Darkblade44431]

lol, cuz i was messin around. and, lmao, no i've never seen that video before.

[<VerbalTouch>]

K i called you out btw

[Darkblade44431]

huh? in a rap battle? i'll go check.