good life remix

[<VerbalTouch>]

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6473006

Was a freestyle

[Kez]

Sorry, but honestly it's just bad..

Lyrics i may not be able to judge as it's a freestyle (apparently)
But delivery is terrible, it sounds like you're trying to rap quietly so as not to wake poeple up or something
Quality you sound way too close to your mic and it pops a few times
Concept is pretty random, but it's a freestyle so
And at the end i can hear talking in the background
Sorry it just wasn't good. And i'm not normally a critic.

[Darkblade44431]

That was awful. the flow was terrible, your voice is terrible(i dont care if you cant help that, you can still switch up your style to make it seem better). And the rhymes were shit. That was just a completely bad song, and nobody would know that you shout out to this site cuz nobody is listening.

[<VerbalTouch>]

haha i never claimed for it to be good so yeah

[Kez]

haha i never claimed for it to be good so yeah

Then that begs the question...

Why post it?

[<VerbalTouch>]

haha i never claimed for it to be good so yeah

Then that begs the question...

Why post it?

To get feed on how to make it better...

[Darkblade44431]

alright, fine. basically, i'll say the same stuff i did before, just nicer.
you didnt have very good lyrics. you didnt have any flow whatsoever. work on those. also, you were extremely quiet, and you said nigga as the most quiet part, as if you live in a black house and ur white, and they get offended when u say it, speak up. k thats it.
btw, lookin forward to our rap battle man.