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NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby Cwayon_Murder » Apr 22nd, '08, 03:39

Vettori wrote:Soundclick,

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Mista KA
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Damn those guys have some sick beats.
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby Xray » Apr 22nd, '08, 06:56

man the recording equipment you have is amazing, quality is always 100%. nice song but im kinda getting tired from these concepts. you need to come up with a unique one, fuck spitting about haters and shit, write a real story and don't use famous soundclick beats, cause nearly everyone that raps uses the famous ones. theres probably over 10 songs recorded over the same beat you used. and heres a hint how to look for sick unknown ones on sounclick, search for beats in different countries, europe mostly have ill ones. countries like england, germany, finland, netherlands, and ignore what beat is coming first, start of page 2, cause always the real good producers don't get enuff credit for there work. no hate just giving my opinion. but this song is cool 8/10 but a new topic and a real story with a sick sampled beat would be awesome :y:
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby Vettori » Apr 22nd, '08, 14:03

Thanks everyone, and ye i get ya, Ive Been wanting to record some diff stuff, Unfortunatly im still stuck in my comfort zone, As for beats, I just grab what appeals me, Ive searched high and Low on Soundclick, even went as far as tryin to make my own beats.. But alot of beats out there dont cut it for me >.<
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby SajN » Apr 22nd, '08, 14:43

Damn good chorus :y: Love it!

Didn't enjoy the first verse very much.
Your verse is better, your voice shows some more power and delivery.
the lyrics are great :y:

Great job :y:
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby Vettori » Apr 22nd, '08, 17:28

Thanks man, :P :b:
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby Steve Spag » Apr 22nd, '08, 17:34

As usual, a great listen. Your verse was sick, and you always have a way of just griding on the beat soo perfectly, lol. The hook was sick too, much better this time around.

Sooooo keeep it up :y:.
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby Vettori » Apr 22nd, '08, 22:41

thanks man, Your feeds always appreciated :b:
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 23rd, '08, 20:22

sick song :y:

i think you been sick enough long enough to be away from the "needing feedback" phase, if you know what i mean.

so i aint gonni give you feed coz i listen to your music as a fan now not a fellow mc tryna give constructive feedback.

so sick track keep it up and keep making dope music :smoking:


also this hook is sick as fuck :y:
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby Tornado » Apr 23rd, '08, 23:14

dammm.....sick chorus, amazing verse man, looks like you got your shit right man. I ain't heard much of yours but i'll be listening more, keep it up :b:
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby Vettori » Apr 24th, '08, 00:14

Thanks Guys means alot, :worship:
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