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[Emadyville]

This is just the first verse of a track from my mixtape. I redid it today and added the rest of the song, just wanted some feedback. Thanks.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/11008152ab33f61b/

And this is another track I've posted twice, which was downloaded a lot without any feedback, so I'm just trying to see what you all think??

http://www.zshare.net/audio/109045328ca64ea7/

[Rain Matrix]

first one was enjoyable... but yur voice was a little low
other than that sick rhymes

tha second one I wasn't feeling, but it wasn't bad

[<Stiiccy>]

you had sick rymes in both songs...but your voice has no emotion...almost like your talkin ovver the beat...

[Emadyville]

Yeah they aren't leveled yet, and I redid the first one so it will sound better. As for emotion, that seems to always be a problem. Working on it though, thanks for the feed.

[DelinQuent]

first track was good, but lack of emotion takes you down. if you had some emotion you'd be hot. rhymes and flow are sick.

i already gave you feed over AIM on the second track.

delivery is key to a hot song, so get on it lol

[Emadyville]

Thanks everyone, I appreciate it.

[<VerbalTouch>]

Thats an old skool flow you got there

You get your name from amityvill?

[Emadyville]

No from my initials D-W, so D.Dubs. So you liked the tracks?

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

1st track has a nice old skool vibe vocals could be louder and overall mixing but lyrics are hot...flow is kool too

2nd track..again nice flow..here ur delievery sounds a lil bit better not perfect but better
keep practising...

[Emadyville]

Thanks man appreciate it