Full scale war

[<VerbalTouch>]

Same thing we tell you every time.

1. Stop using offensive racial slurs.
2. Flow's slowly getting there but get some fucking rhythm and emotion
3. Your slowly learning to rhyme which is good
4. Stop reading
5. Spend time writing and re-writing your lyrics till it's something you'd remotely be impressed by.
6. Stop bitching and blaming your "tools" (reference to the "bad workman" analogy) and just do something about your flaws


Least it rhymed though.

DId you honestly say
1. Stop using offensive racial slurs.



Yeah im so racists arnt I ?

Least you actually gave tips this time instead of be a dick about it props for that

[Darkblade44431]

lol, even when he tried to help, its still in his blood to be a dick. i am too, just easier to be more calm on the internet.

[IceAxe]

The intro was... well, it was an intro. It does sound like you're reading your rhymes, try memorizing it as much as possible. You need work on delivery, you sound unmotivated and not to into it.. Flow was flimsy too.

Keep workin, you'll get better with time

[<VerbalTouch>]

Thanks

[B.A.D.]

whats up with that n*gga please shit???

lol

your flow can be improved, try to memorize your lines before spittin that works cool

the lyrics n rhymes were cool, nice work on that

make your emotion sound, u kinda bored on this track.. but nothing to bad

keep it going man.... ask trshady mixers to help you out on quality

other than that, cool

keep at it bro

[<VerbalTouch>]

Hah the intro was produced by someone else they said i could use it so i just put it on there I recorded a lil something but need help on mixing think you can do it? I need the temp fixed up.