by TheWeirdoIsBack » Jun 19th, '08, 03:30
Alright man here goes. I don't/can't go as in-depth as I like to sometimes, but hope this helps anyway.
Production: I know you had nothin' to do with making the beat, but I just had to say it was a great choice. I loved it.
Lyrics: As some others have stated, there wasn't anything too crazy here, but it was real personal and from the heart, and I say for shit like this you just gotta get it out real simple and blunt. So vocab-wise, nothing too complex, but as far as the story your words tell, it was great. I could really relate to the shit you were saying too man, like the theme song of my life right now haha.
Hook: One of the highlights of the song imo. The singing was good, better than I expected, and again just what your saying really got to me. That deep, personal shit. Love it.
Overall: An awesome track. After I heard it once, I downloaded it and its going on my music player haha. Keep it up bro, if this is just something you did out of boredom can't wait to hear the shit your workin' on for the album and mixtape.
4/5