Running Through The Daisies

[DelinQuent]

i'll change the title and give it a bump when i do.

thanks again to everyone for their feedback.

[Speech]

idk what ppl's problem is with the beat, it's aaite...something new, even tho it sounds like that industry stuff
the verses were aait...didn take me off the ground but nice....
you didn use the autotune on the whole chorus, i feel that, nice job
but don't let the autotune do most of the job when singin..this kinda goes out to anybody here using it...you should have some sense for SINGIN cuz it's getting bored when all the untalented ppl use autotune, there is no difference in the voice...not saying that dq can;t sing, just talkin about everyone in general...

track was cool...title confused me first i was like "wtf " hahaha

8 / 10

[DelinQuent]

thanks spizzy. i actually cant sing lmfao.

@slimthps, i don't think the verses sucked, i do agree that the flow came off in points, but i actually really liked my verses here, i'm not one to ride my own dick either. the idea was to sound off-the-wall. sounds like it just wasnt your think but i really do appreicate your opinion and i'm sorry you didn't enjoy the track

[theJFKshow]

It's just that your verses are all over the place with no meaning at all. "Move like animal"? You can do better than that.

[DelinQuent]

lmfao. the point of the song was to be random, notice how i pronounced animal very different. it was to go with the crazy concept of the song. there's meaning in the verses. "move like animal/ cracker i'm brittle" saying i move like an animal cracker, you know those cookies, but cracker was also a reference to being white. a tiny bit of wordplay in there.

don't get me wrong i'm not hating on your opinion at all, i realllllly do in all honesty appreicate every opinion wether it be good or bad. thanks again everyone.

[Tornado]

won't dl..tried 3 times...was intriguied by ur crazy twist..sounds a bit eminem to me..but lyrics look good

[DelinQuent]

zshare must be fucked up. try again if a few hours if you could. thanks.

[Tornado]

feedback time
nice chorus..for once autotune didnt piss me off
thought beat was alright..1st verse was done well..2nd didnt flow as well..think you needer a higher tempo track and itll sound sicker....really does remind me of slim shady era..nope? only me?
neway i like it

[DelinQuent]

Thanks for checking back and leaving feedback. I appreciate it