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A Verse

Postby dbeauluvswomen » Jun 25th, '08, 19:27

Last edited by dbeauluvswomen on Jun 26th, '08, 19:51, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Freestyle

Postby B.A.D. » Jun 26th, '08, 05:36

nooo I wanna see this but it gets fucked up everytime I download it

hmm, can u up it on mp3 version???

cuz somethings wrong with my computer this days lol
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Re: Freestyle

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Jun 26th, '08, 08:34

wow and i was expecting it to be shit gppd freestyle homie :y:
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Re: Freestyle

Postby Xray » Jun 26th, '08, 15:11

SiiNiDE wrote:it was pretty good, but dont say its a freestyle if its not. any person who mixes their own stuff can hear where you punch in. (meaning you stopped recording then recorded again)

it was decent though.

yeah, just say its a verse no need to turn it into a freestyle...good shit though :y:
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Re: Freestyle

Postby DelinQuent » Jun 26th, '08, 19:17

clearly not a freestyle. :n:

for a written verse it's damn good. loving the flow and you got some nice rhymes.
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Re: Freestyle

Postby dbeauluvswomen » Jun 26th, '08, 19:50

You're right, it is not a freestyle. I didn't even think about titling it a verse. Since it was short, I just wrote Freestyle. Appreciate it folks :y:
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Re: A Verse

Postby Solace » Jun 28th, '08, 21:53

gave it a listen and its good :y: good rhymes + flow.
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Re: A Verse

Postby Speech » Jun 29th, '08, 10:30

this was one enjoyable verse man...nice job...gotta mix a lil better to get a more cocky feeling to this but it was ok...nice...keep it up :y:
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