Profet - The Real F**king Thriller

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I made this for a battle against this other fool who was talking smack. Check my track out below

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The other guys track is HERE

ALSO IF YOU CAN PLEASE VOTE FOR THE BEST TRACK @ Kumar-Radio.

Feedback is really appreciated

[Kosovic]

Aaaaaaaaaa the gypsy

[B.A.D.]

hahaha lol, ur accent is cool.... flow is real nice

punches is kinda weak, but do the work...

quality lacks a bit... but its pretti nice mixed

the flow was lost on the second verse.... but what was good on it, and better lyrics on this verse (except the whoop ur ass shit) lol... thats a weak punch

u gotta add more volume to the hook

other than that.... nice diss... but needs some work

[<VerbalTouch>]

when you said i talk about myself i thought you said taco bell

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Big Ax-D: lol thanks a lot for the feedback!
djblue: LOLL it does sound like that
Kosovic: LOL ahahaha

[Rap Dogg]

ya both suck

[Kosovic]

So do u

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

lol@the beat
..yeah hook needs to be louder..
and somthin i noticed bout ur voice....it sounds very monotone... just the overlays made ur voice raise up...
umm yeah.....its not a lyrical bomb but its okay ....
flow can be improved too...as ax said....2nd verse was out of place

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°[~CHR!$~]°: Thanks for the feedback.. appreciate it boss