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NEW!! "Speechless" - new short track

Postby Kez » Jul 25th, '08, 22:46

I know i posted an unreleased track yesterday as hype for Either Side Of The UK, but this is just a lil track i made for my upcoming solo tape, and it's brand new, so i thought i'd put it out. I've decided to change Universal II into an EP so it's only gonna be a few tracks long. I don't have the time or patience to make another 20 track tape with my mic issues. I'm also changing the name, but i'm keepin that secret.

So here is a new track, bad quality as usual but:

Kez wrote:"My mic issues"


So shut up.

Check it on my MySpace...
..Or check it on Zshare.

Update:
The pauses in the track were because i was trying a new flow.
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Re: NEW!! "Speechless" - new short track

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Jul 25th, '08, 23:35

Like i sai don msn i think you have goten to sound a lot better since the last I eard from you and that was like the URD mixtape :y:
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Re: NEW!! "Speechless" - new short track

Postby Xray » Jul 26th, '08, 00:45

beat is decent, flow is a bit choppy and slow but not bad. didn't like the little break after you start your verse, you should of maybe echoed it? delivery is not bad but can be improved. you seem to always rap about this concept so it kinda got boring for me.

i think you should put more syllables in your lines to fasten up your flow and rap faster cause its way too basic atm. its like we all know the beat is slow so you rapping slow on it is too predictable.
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Re: NEW!! "Speechless" - new short track

Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 26th, '08, 00:56

I like the flow although the pause at the end seemed a bit too long. The beat didn't appeal to me at first but you made me like it. Sick lyrics too. Quality seemed fine to me, I understood everything you said quite clearly though your voice was a bit louder at certain points, specifically at the end of some lines. Great job. Keep it up :y:
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Re: NEW!! "Speechless" - new short track

Postby Tornado » Jul 26th, '08, 01:20

yo, for the most part it was good, like the lyrics and concept of the track. The beat isn't my fav but your flow on most of it, only thing is like xray says, you should use more syllables in the lines but to me the beat waqs to slow tempo for it but sounds good. Can't wait for the ep
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Re: NEW!! "Speechless" - new short track

Postby Kez » Jul 26th, '08, 01:45

@ Blue, Thomas and Tornado: Thanks :b:

@Xray: Yeah i'll be trying diff concepts and flows and that on the EP, but when i heard the beat i decided to go with this kinda flow, it just felt like that to me. But thanks for listenin :b:
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Re: NEW!! "Speechless" - new short track

Postby Xray » Jul 26th, '08, 01:47

Kez wrote:@ Blue, Thomas and Tornado: Thanks :b:

@Xray: Yeah i'll be trying diff concepts and flows and that on the EP, but when i heard the beat i decided to go with this kinda flow, it just felt like that to me. But thanks for listenin :b:

cool, looking forward to what else you got to say on the ep ;)
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Re: NEW!! "Speechless" - new short track

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jul 26th, '08, 06:59

ehh i didnt like the beat
but it was a good lil track
flow was off at times
delivery was different idk how to explain it but it was
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Re: NEW!! "Speechless" - new short track

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jul 26th, '08, 11:54

ryhmes are fire again...
but yeah flow went off at times
okay track IMO.... :y:
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Re: NEW!! "Speechless" - new short track

Postby Kez » Jul 27th, '08, 14:48

@ Maybe: Cheers :b:

@Sticcy: Yeah i was tryin a more clear and fierce delivery here because of the beat, so that's probably why. Cheers for listenin :y:

@Chris: Thanks
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Re: NEW!! "Speechless" - new short track

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 27th, '08, 22:48

the flow, is there when your on beat, the stopping and starting does have effect coz of the beat but a better beat with an actual voice sample using this flow would work alot better, there was once or twice when your flow did slip but you got back on quickly and it wasnt to noticable.

the wii fit line was dope :p the lyrics overall were nice, rhymes solid and content was really nice.

the delivery was really strong i think and your pronouncation was great, clear and on point perfomence spitting it.

good short track :y:

and great to see even though you got a comfort zone with the style on universal that you aint hesitant to go completely different with the flow :y:
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Re: NEW!! "Speechless" - new short track

Postby Kez » Jul 28th, '08, 01:16

@ Bar: Yeah, i don't wanna stay in the same zone all the time :p Cheers

@ Killa: Yeah i see what you mean, the track is different from my previous, like i said, i was experimenting. And thanks :b:
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Re: NEW!! "Speechless" - new short track

Postby DelinQuent » Jul 29th, '08, 21:34

i like the beat.

rhymes are solid, flow sounds solid too. this topic has been overdone by you now. lol.

overall a good short song. :y:
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Re: NEW!! "Speechless" - new short track

Postby Speech » Jul 30th, '08, 08:39

beat is fuckin ace!
but...like sajjad said....flow tooooooo slooooow...nah mean...lyrics were ok but that concept gets boring after the 100000's time..i know this is what rappers rap about lately but switch it up

tape is anticipaed, cool :y:
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