I enjoyed this alot. and like most artists I did find some things that coulda been better. The end of the chorus Ended sorta Sloppy.. But This whole song turned out probably better then if i were to write on it.
And Ur voice is raw man...how old are u ?
You brought a slower vibe to it. Which helped me understand it.
Im gonna give some Listens to ur other songs...and just hope ur not a one hitter