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Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 9th, '08, 06:17

i remade Runnin by Tupac and Biggie

its called I Pray

and ill go ahead and say i didnt mix it well and the chorus blows

http://www.zshare.net/audio/16754017f08c0812/

but feed me plez
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Re: new sticcy z shit

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 9th, '08, 06:26

Chet wrote:I'll review it when i fucking feel like it babe :smoking:

aka most likely tonight

you better :sweating:
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Re: new sticcy z shit

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Aug 9th, '08, 12:57

the 1st two bars had great flow
then it fall off....but sometimes u caught it again
hook wasnt my taste :unsure:
2nd verse has a nice flow :y:
lyrics were aite overall :y:
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Re: new sticcy z shit

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 9th, '08, 20:49

thx for the feed
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Re: new sticcy z shit

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 9th, '08, 21:08

Chet wrote:no problem, anything my my boy toy :shifty:

mmmmmmmmmmmmm :whistle:
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Re: new sticcy z shit

Postby Xray » Aug 10th, '08, 01:09

lol for once i heard how you sound like when you talk :p

and what i think was you should of had a LAID LAID back style on this track. but still good man :y: chorus would of been better if you placed the overlays on exact time as the chorus. flow was good, fell here and there, but good. delivery wasn't bad :y: cool practice track :y:
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Re: new sticcy z shit

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 10th, '08, 02:01

Xray wrote:lol for once i heard how you sound like when you talk :p

and what i think was you should of had a LAID LAID back style on this track. but still good man :y: chorus would of been better if you placed the overlays on exact time as the chorus. flow was good, fell here and there, but good. delivery wasn't bad :y: cool practice track :y:

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Re: new sticcy z shit

Postby DelinQuent » Aug 10th, '08, 09:15

i think this would be better if you used your natural voice.

flow comes and goes, needs work. mixing on the chorus is what ruined it. weird overlays. as sajjad said, normal overlays would have been 10x better.

second verse was better, used a different voice, i liked it a lot better.

overall not a bad track, not a great track but a decent one. keep up the good work :y:
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Re: new sticcy z shit

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 10th, '08, 09:16

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Re: new sticcy z shit

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Aug 10th, '08, 16:29

Xray wrote:lol for once i heard how you sound like when you talk :p


if you talked on msn you can hear him trippen out as well :happy:
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Re: new sticcy z shit

Postby Kez » Aug 11th, '08, 01:44

Zshare still not working for me so i went on your MySpace

Bad choice using an official beat, there's no way you can really out-do Pac and Big

Sick lyrics, delivery sounds good but maybe a bit forced
Flow is good but goes a bit off a couple times
Hook is decent, at least you did a different hook to the original.

Decent track
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Re: new sticcy z shit

Postby Tornado » Aug 19th, '08, 18:18

Chorus :n: 1st verse was nothing special, but decent..2nd verse was better flow and lyric wise..alright practise track
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