*TWO NEW TRACKS* (PUT ON, TRAPPED INSIDE)

[Boston]

well heres two more tracks, trapped inside is unfinished but in put on, im the 2nd verse
you may not get some shit, its basically a track for my hometown, so some punchlines you might not get haha. and the other song is just some sad shit, im first verse

Put On (Betz, Josh E (me), PBG)

http://www.zshare.net/audio/18904655ce23e115/


Trapped Inside (Josh E (me), PBG) - Unfinished

http://www.zshare.net/audio/1890471834d9d3ed/


feedback please
collabs, whats good?!

[enjinn]

i listen to put on...its not my kinda track...but showed potential

[Speech]

put on : couldn enjoy this cuz ur ppl's quality didn match the jeezy quality...sounds ruff but all these rmx's needa be doen with flawless studio quality, i know cuz i've done similar bullshit...none of the verses got me creamin my pants so they were all the same to me

trapped inside : liked it more but it wasn a banger...i hope your gonna put a hook on that bitch
you ppl still recordin in a studio? cuz damn your vocals need a big ass fix up, can't just be the 10000 $ mic, you need the mixin skillz to yo
keep practisin yo, dont hold back
peace

[Boston]

ya i understand that but with the money were paying, i doubt things will get better :[ lol. so im just trying to make it with whatever now. im not going to pay a lot of money when i just started haha. but yaaa ima keep doing what i do with that right now. thanks tho

[Boston]

and ya im going to start working on solo shit, and probaly finish that trapped inside, im getting good feedback on that.

[dbeauluvswomen]

i listened to the first verse of Trapped Inside and I liked what I heard. Nice verse, nice rhymes.

[Boston]

thanks

[Boston]

the point of this was basically asking to pay attention to my verses lol, so yeah.. feedback on that would be nice.