*New* Big Mak & Apocalypse: "Broken Mics"

[Makaveli525]

Well, I'm back again.

Hopefully less wack than before.

First verse is Mak, second verse is Apocalypse.

Mic quality is bad, I know. Nothing I can do about that right now.

So sound quality aside... what do yall think?

http://www.zshare.net/audio/20413458d11fb171/

[Kez]

Lyrics are there, but there's no emotion or delivery.
Flow is ish, falls off several times

[Makaveli525]

Which parts does the flow fall off?

I'm not denying it's true, just wondering so I can improve.

The "emotion" is always tough for me cuz I tend not to express much emotion even when I'm not rapping...

[KDEWolf]

Which parts does the flow fall off?

I'm not denying it's true, just wondering so I can improve.

The "emotion" is always tough for me cuz I tend not to express much emotion even when I'm not rapping...

Ya i gotta agree. Definatly exagerate your emotion more than neccisary. Alof of Rappers are really cocky on the mic but are chill in real life. Just exagerate what ever your lines are

[Makaveli525]

Which parts does the flow fall off?

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Just wondering... like I said... flow is something I wanna improve on.

[<VerbalTouch>]

did you amke the beat on mixcraft or something? would be alot better if mixed right

[Makaveli525]

I made the beat in FL in about 10 minutes cuz we needed a beat and I didn't have one ready... one of my productions I'm less proud of.

I am no mixer... I have no experience mixing whatsoever.

I still have all the individual accs and the beat, so if anyone's willing to mix, I'd greatly appreciate it... although I may be wack.. lol

[Requiem]

hey man, i'm always willing to help fellow tr members in need. i'm decent at mixing, pm me sometime. and if u need a beat. i'm available for productions too