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Jay-19 f. D-Dab - Woah Woah! (session)

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Jay-19 f. D-Dab - Woah Woah! (session)

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 17th, '08, 16:02

This is just some track we did in like half an hour. We wrote the lyrics on spot and just recorded it. Though I'm actually kind of happy with my verse, turned out pretty nice. The concept isn't the best but oh well... enjoy! :p

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Re: Jay-19 f. D-Dab - Woah Woah! (session)

Postby Xray » Sep 17th, '08, 16:14

first guy: sounds like pik pocket with an accent. his flow was cool, but his delivery wasn't so good, but still aight.

i gotta go so ill finish feeding the rest later.

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Re: Jay-19 f. D-Dab - Woah Woah! (session)

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 17th, '08, 16:16

Xray wrote:first guy: sounds like pik pocket with an accent. his flow was cool, but his delivery wasn't so good, but still aight.

i gotta go so ill finish feeding the rest later.

peace


Never heard of Pik Pocket, but I'll pass it on to him, lol. :8)
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Re: Jay-19 f. D-Dab - Woah Woah! (session)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Sep 17th, '08, 16:20

its a good track .....hook could be better but was oookay
i agree ...1st guy sounds like pik pocket :p ...lyrics are strange lmao...idk
ur flow and verse was decent
6.7/10 :y:
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Re: Jay-19 f. D-Dab - Woah Woah! (session)

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 17th, '08, 16:42

Thanks C-Riz! :8)
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Re: Jay-19 f. D-Dab - Woah Woah! (session)

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 17th, '08, 21:28

as usual the only 3 guys who give feedback are from URD :y:

whoa, he does sound like pik haha... but yeah sounds real real nice, first verse is good, flow could be fixed a bit, but still sounds gangsta

the piano in the hook is amazing, but you shouldn't sing on it (unless you autotune it)

second guy sounds like he been doin this for a long time, quality is great, flow is better, good verse, also lyrics are pretti creative with this one, sounds nice.

beat is good

nice track :y:
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Re: Jay-19 f. D-Dab - Woah Woah! (session)

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 17th, '08, 21:36

Big Ax-D wrote:as usual the only 3 guys who give feedback are from URD :y:

whoa, he does sound like pik haha... but yeah sounds real real nice, first verse is good, flow could be fixed a bit, but still sounds gangsta

the piano in the hook is amazing, but you shouldn't sing on it (unless you autotune it)

second guy sounds like he been doin this for a long time, quality is great, flow is better, good verse, also lyrics are pretti creative with this one, sounds nice.

beat is good

nice track :y:



Thanks Ax-D, and thanks URD for feeding this shit! :smoking:
About the beat, it was just something we found on the web, and wanted to spit on it. So we just wrote something up and got into the booth. I agree on the hook-situation, could be better, but since it was just a session, we didn't really care.
And the second guy is me, I've been rapping for about 3-4 years now so I've developed a lot.

Thanks for the feed once again. :y:
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Re: Jay-19 f. D-Dab - Woah Woah! (session)

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 18th, '08, 19:26

More feed please? :p
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Re: Jay-19 f. D-Dab - Woah Woah! (session)

Postby SajN » Sep 18th, '08, 19:30

First guys made me for some weird reasons think of Cashis :p (but not in a bad way)
his lyrics sounded ok.

I liked the hook :y:

ur verse was def good!
I liked they way you rapped it, and lyrics were gooood :y:


Nice track :y:
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Re: Jay-19 f. D-Dab - Woah Woah! (session)

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 18th, '08, 19:35

Thanks bro! :y:
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Re: Jay-19 f. D-Dab - Woah Woah! (session)

Postby Kez » Sep 18th, '08, 19:41

KillahGoat wrote:More feed please? :p


Pfft, i don't see you checking my fucking song, do you?

No :shakehead:

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As for the song

Beat is alright
Concept has been done before
Delivery is decent but sounds a bit bored/repetitive
Lyrics are average
Hook needs better singing
D-Dab has some good flow
Lyrics again are just average
Delivery works well

It was alright but club tracks annoy me.
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Re: Jay-19 f. D-Dab - Woah Woah! (session)

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 18th, '08, 20:06

Kez wrote:
KillahGoat wrote:More feed please? :p


Pfft, i don't see you checking my fucking song, do you?

No :shakehead:

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As for the song

Beat is alright
Concept has been done before
Delivery is decent but sounds a bit bored/repetitive
Lyrics are average
Hook needs better singing
D-Dab has some good flow
Lyrics again are just average
Delivery works well

It was alright but club tracks annoy me.


Looks like I have to do that then.

And thanks for the feed, but to my defence, this was just a session. The concept, lyrics, beats was the first we came up with so. Can't expect a dope song then. :8)
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Re: Jay-19 f. D-Dab - Woah Woah! (session)

Postby Call Me Pik » Oct 17th, '08, 23:30

wtf lmao ...i like tha track give it 7/10 ..didnt know i spit on this track lol
http://www.myspace.com/pikpocket

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