title sums it up, a break up song. dont mind the part of the chorus where i sing, a girl is supposed to come in and do that for me, but i sang just to fill up the bar until i get my lady singer. its called gon away
http://www.zshare.net/audio/5019644975aa1bfc/
break up song
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Re: break up song
by Dark Blue » Oct 22nd, '08, 22:03
ooo nice job keep it up
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Re: break up song
by neversnooze » Oct 23rd, '08, 03:05
lyrics: flowed great loved the theme
the track was alrite but would be better when u get that girl to sing the chorus
the track was alrite but would be better when u get that girl to sing the chorus
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Re: break up song
by DelinQuent » Oct 23rd, '08, 17:42
first off. it's time you gave feedback to other people.
anyway... flow is good, delivery is very boring. rhymes are solid.
hook is eh, even with the girl i dont think it'll be special, just sounded boring, was hardly able to tell it was the hook.
overall... i wouldnt be able to listen to this again because it was boring. lyrics and all were good but the delivery had me snoring. stay up and keep working
anyway... flow is good, delivery is very boring. rhymes are solid.
hook is eh, even with the girl i dont think it'll be special, just sounded boring, was hardly able to tell it was the hook.
overall... i wouldnt be able to listen to this again because it was boring. lyrics and all were good but the delivery had me snoring. stay up and keep working
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