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[Emadyville]

Ok I posted these lyrics before and everyone seemed to like them, well the song is finished. It can be heard at http://www.myspace.com/stoneyent

My verse is last so you just have to wait for it.
ANy feedback is appreciated.
Lyrics:

We ain’t from the hood, we ain’t gangsters,
We don’t shoot shoot, but our music is bangers,
Enough of the who’s who, we ain’t strangers,
We just live to write, the studio’s our chambers,
When we grab the mic it’s our life and property,
Properly spit sick shit with no apology,
Anomalies hit it big with stupid shit you gotta-see,
How a lotta-me knows why they so commonly
View rap with hatred and one big monopoly,
I rhyme all day and to me I spit honestly,
Therefore I probably deserve the label prodigy,
But if you think I’m gangsta you ain’t thinking logically,

[Emadyville]

all the dudes before you sounded the same and very very annoying.

Chorus is just horrible...take the chorus out or make the song shorter lol....I should not have that stuck in my head

Verse was good, better voice then the other 9 guys, and your verse didn't contain anything gangsta in the song (most of the others were talking about not giving a fuck and smoking weed) so right there is a plus for you.

Good verse man

Thank you man, I appreciate the thorough feed. All they said was here's a beat, the songs called "We ain't Gangstas" so thats what I wrote and I'm glad it stood out in your mind. Haha sorry you didn't seem to like anyone else, but I'm glad you liked my verse. I appreciate it a lot Chet, thanks again.

[DelinQuent]

yeah like chet said, those guys sucked. honestly every one of them had a terrible verse. i wrote like that about 3 years ago lol. all of their deliveries were extremely boring. i honestly dont have a single good word to say about their verses and im not hating lol

but your verse defo stood out above all of them.

your verse had good flow and great rhymes. your delivery was good. honestly a good verse from you.

[Emadyville]

yeah like chet said, those guys sucked. honestly every one of them had a terrible verse. i wrote like that about 3 years ago lol. all of their deliveries were extremely boring. i honestly dont have a single good word to say about their verses and im not hating lol

but your verse defo stood out above all of them.

your verse had good flow and great rhymes. your delivery was good. honestly a good verse from you.

Thanks man. Feed helped, and I'm glad you continue to see the improvement.

[Emadyville]

Bump

[Emadyville]

Last bump. More feed please!

[Xray]

beat sucks big time, sorry but that beat is fucking horrible. the main melody pissed me off, the pattern was retarded, only thing was maybe decent is the drums and bass.

he only verse i enjoyed was the first guy, the rest god help you lol.his voice suits the beat, matter fact his the only one who did good on the track.

Chorus is the gayest shit i've heard in a long time, its so empty and the main title is so fucking corny i felt like doing this listening to it -->

DQ that verse was wack man, lyrics, delivery whole verse sucked big time. fuck were you thinking using that? made a bad choice using that verse man.

Emadyville sorry bro your voice/flow/delivery/lyrics don't suit this beat what so ever, so i didn't like your verse. and you definitely need to put more emotion in it, cause you were reading and it was boring.

Overal: this song sucks besides the first guy. the others beside the first guy, dq and you...sucked aswell didn't like there verses at all. poor song.

[Emadyville]

Well thanks for being brutally honest. DQ wasn't on the song btw. And I don't care about the other guys, I only cared about my verse. It appears it may have been the worst thing you ever heard, sorry to your ears from me.

[Xray]

Well thanks for being brutally honest. DQ wasn't on the song btw. And I don't care about the other guys, I only cared about my verse. It appears it may have been the worst thing you ever heard, sorry to your ears from me.

I like to be honest about things, crediting a rapper for something he doesn't deserve is wrong. you'll end up a shitty rapper if you really observe false feed like people saying loved your track man, that shit was dope when it wasn't, you get what I mean. And are you serious that's not DQ??!?! god damn i swear to god that guy sounds EXACTLY like DQ. Im sure it is DQ lol no way that isn't DQ. an naa man its cool we all make mistakes making the wrong tracks, featuring in wrong songs, or spitting somfin that don't suit the beat thats why i let you know you made a mistake so its all good.

[Emadyville]

^ Word (And it's DEF NOT DQ lol)

[Xray]

lmao ok Im gonna check the song once again. Just to clear things up, what song exactly did you post your link for? "We Ain't Gangstas"? cause that's the song i left feedback for. Ok now i see that Im wrong lol but he does SOUND SO MUCH LIKE DQ. I swear if he released a track by the DQ name, i wouldn't even know that that isn't dq lol dq when you read this don't get offended, cause your lyrically better than the dude, but he does have your style and flow and voice lollll sounds exactly like what you sounded 1 or 2 years ago.

[DelinQuent]

FUCK YOU SAJJAD lmfao

i might put out wack shit from time to time, but come on, nothing THAT wack lmfao

[Boston]

i dont think the beat is as bad as people make it out to be, i think it sounds bad because of the topic of the song and the mixing and all that. the first verse is nothing special, basic flow, sounds like a new rapper. the hook i guess fits in. nothing special though. the 2nd verse a better flow, but still sounds off a BIT at some points, lyrics in the first two verses are nothing amazing. im feeding this as i hear the verses by the way haha, the 3rd verse just came on, but i think so far the first 3 could of done way better and i think the quality needs to be better. oh shit, 4th dude im liking the best right now. but havent heard you yet. lol his flow and lyrics are by far the best right now. okay i just listened to yours now to. i think you and the 4th guy are clearly the best on the song, but you weren't on the same topic of the other guys really i think. i think you strayed away from it. sorry for this feed i know its all over the place but im just writing my idea's/opinions out as the song plays. keep it up, i know you have what it takes to improve to, just keep making songs and work on your weaknesses. i wouldnt reccomend making a long song like this about not being gangsta's lol.. thats just me know.. keep it up, peaceeee

[Emadyville]

^ Thanks for checking it Boston. Yeah I didn't know what they wrote, plus I want to be different from them, I don't want to sound like they do lol. Thanks again.

[Jens14]

Haha, that beat is so funny (not in a bad way)

Well, I liked the song, keep it up