Survive Tha Night Verse

[Rain Matrix]

Rain Matrix
Survive Tha Night
2008

Survive The Night.mp3 - 1.34MB


Lyrics-

breaking news tha Fed Failed
take a breath and Exhale bet u can't taste tha Red Trails
tommorrow is Left Stale by tha politicans Next Tale
they really don't Say Much only talk that they'll Save Ya
coporations Hate Us even with those Pay Cuts reality won't Wait Up
or Slow Down act like u Know Now my Souls Bound for a Gold Crown
not global Expansion just a heavenly Mansion whenever I Cease ta Live
I'll hold on to a Piece Of It but I don't Need Tha Shit
pardon me while I Speak A Bit I'm on a Free Budget
Opression's a Dark Tool Depression's my Bars Truth
tha Recession was a Smart Move maybe now Bush can Start School
one where tha Retards Rule then make excuses like it's Hard Too
my rhymes Rock His Whole Skull they leave Objects Totaled
making it rain like a Tropical Low they can try to Stop This Loco
it's not Possible Tho I'm for tha Revolution
it won't be American Rebels Losing
see thru tha Threats Illusion it'll Get Ya Moving
I don't fear a piece of Metal Shooting
let um Test Tha Prooven it won't be my Execution

Copyright - Rain Matrix 2008

[Tash8]

lmao at Bush can now start school

ok your flow was off on this, though around here
coporations Hate Us even with those Pay Cuts reality won't Wait Up
or Slow Down act like u Know Now my Souls Bound for a Gold Crown

it was fine, but then it fell off again, try writing ur piece while the beat is playing, it's probably easier that way....

also get someone to mix ur stuff for you, i'm pretty sure one of the good mixers on tr can clean up ur vocals nicely..

[DelinQuent]

normally i wouldnt feed you, cause you wont listen anywa but i'll do it anyway.

your flow is OFF. it comes and goes but for the most part even when it was on, it didnt match the beat and i couldnt really get into it.

"taste the red trails"... what are these red trails you speak of? to me it looks like you wrote that just for the sake of rhyming.

overall the lyrics are nice, but the flow is absolutely horrid and needs massive work. also your voice needs some tweaking because it just doesnt sound good. maybe a deeper, less super excited voice would work for you. keep working


now i expect you to say "i dont need to keep working, im at the top of my game" and some other bullshit like you usually do, but if you can muster up a bit of maturity i'd like to see you actually listen to the feedback that you have received and possibly work on your weaknesses to possibly become a better rapper. you've got writing down, now you just need to learn how to rap the lyrics that you write.

[Rain Matrix]

first off tha Red Trails were referring to chemtrails a jet exhaust that looms in tha air and eventually falls to earth...

second of all I never said I was tha best rapper alive, I appreciate tha honest feedback and I expected much worse from this crowd of rain matrix haters

Tash thanks- I know my flow was off, I want to get better, I want to be a rapper
I'm not running around TR saying fuck everybody

I've done some stupid things but who hasn't I'm not perfect,

DelinQuent thanks I will work on my flow, I have an idea I'm gonna put away tha pad and just freestyle on a track and let tha world have it... so I won't sit and say "I am at tha top of my game"
but I will say at tha heart of this track was a message that will keep me coming back to I'm gone for good