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Re: [NEW] SajN - Blind Ambitions

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 23rd, '08, 14:52

Xray wrote:I don't know if the beat is sampled or not, because the piano sounds sampled, but i love it. Melody is awesome, drums are weak, didn't match at all. I feel it needed that undergroundish drums you know? but cool beat from Mart.

Like I said before, you still sound like you have something in your mouth when your rapping, very boring. You sound like your extremely bored, and you have a tremendous accent. I don't know how you can improve your accent, I mean my parents don't know how to speak English and if they raped they would have a better accent than you, weird example lol.

Lyrics don't mean shit if the spitting is wack, you know? You haven't improved at all from your last audio, and I mean at all. You sound EXACT the same. I told you before quit rapping in English it's not cut out for you, you ignored me and said rapping in Norwegian is boring, yeah like you rapping in English isn't :p lol

This concept falls in the same group as all your concepts, need to switch it up every now and then. You wanted my feedback so here it is, lol I'm not afraid to tell anyone he sucks or anything so that's why I sound like a dick, but the way I see it, harsh feedback gets to you more than false feedback like the rest of everyone that left you feed, saying it sounded good, or good job when it's a very very shit job.

I would have to agree with him, if your accent was lessened you could be a very prominent force..
you gotta work on that more. You've probably been working on it for awhile and me saying this may sound redundant, but it has to be said.
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Re: [NEW] SajN - Blind Ambitions

Postby SajN » Nov 23rd, '08, 15:06

Thanks ya'll :worship:

Don't worry Sajjad, I am not gonna argue with you :p :p
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Re: [NEW] SajN - Blind Ambitions

Postby <Stiiccy> » Nov 24th, '08, 15:17

your improving...i cant understand half the shit you say tho...

delivery needs alot of work man...

flow comes and goes...

your getting better...just work on the delivery
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Re: [NEW] SajN - Blind Ambitions

Postby SajN » Nov 24th, '08, 15:38

Thank you man.
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Re: [NEW] SajN - Blind Ambitions

Postby mart85 » Nov 24th, '08, 16:10

Xray wrote:I don't know if the beat is sampled or not, because the piano sounds sampled, but i love it. Melody is awesome, drums are weak, didn't match at all. I feel it needed that undergroundish drums you know? but cool beat from Mart.


the beat is not sampled

and yeah I agree with you about the drums, that's one of the main reasons why I never really liked this beat that much :sweating: I remember back then I changed the drums a few times and couldn't find the right ones... but people told me they liked the beat (I had used it for a Lose Yourself remix back then), so I thought I should just leave it like that lol

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Re: [NEW] SajN - Blind Ambitions

Postby Xray » Nov 25th, '08, 02:40

mart85 wrote:
Xray wrote:I don't know if the beat is sampled or not, because the piano sounds sampled, but i love it. Melody is awesome, drums are weak, didn't match at all. I feel it needed that undergroundish drums you know? but cool beat from Mart.


the beat is not sampled

and yeah I agree with you about the drums, that's one of the main reasons why I never really liked this beat that much :sweating: I remember back then I changed the drums a few times and couldn't find the right ones... but people told me they liked the beat (I had used it for a Lose Yourself remix back then), so I thought I should just leave it like that lol

thanks for the comments


Cool man, no problem. And damn, the piano isn't sampled haha damn great work than bro, for real those pianos is the shit. I was actually checking your soundclick page last night, how come you haven't got anything new on there?
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Re: [NEW] SajN - Blind Ambitions

Postby mart85 » Nov 26th, '08, 05:09

Xray wrote:
mart85 wrote:
Xray wrote:I don't know if the beat is sampled or not, because the piano sounds sampled, but i love it. Melody is awesome, drums are weak, didn't match at all. I feel it needed that undergroundish drums you know? but cool beat from Mart.


the beat is not sampled

and yeah I agree with you about the drums, that's one of the main reasons why I never really liked this beat that much :sweating: I remember back then I changed the drums a few times and couldn't find the right ones... but people told me they liked the beat (I had used it for a Lose Yourself remix back then), so I thought I should just leave it like that lol

thanks for the comments


Cool man, no problem. And damn, the piano isn't sampled haha damn great work than bro, for real those pianos is the shit. I was actually checking your soundclick page last night, how come you haven't got anything new on there?


thanks man... and I basically stopped uploading my beats on soundclick almost a year ago... I prefer to keep my beats on my computer now... when you post beats on the net, they kinda lose value, and they can get jacked or whatever etc... and I got tired of always promoting my soundclick lol, it was way too hard to get higher in the charts, but the cool thing is that I still get as many views/plays as I did a year ago :unsure:
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Re: [NEW] SajN - Blind Ambitions

Postby Xray » Nov 26th, '08, 05:14

mart85 wrote:thanks man... and I basically stopped uploading my beats on soundclick almost a year ago... I prefer to keep my beats on my computer now... when you post beats on the net, they kinda lose value, and they can get jacked or whatever etc... and I got tired of always promoting my soundclick lol, it was way too hard to get higher in the charts, but the cool thing is that I still get as many views/plays as I did a year ago :unsure:


Hahaha yeah people are jacking your beats as we speak. :zipped: I don't blame them :shifty: But yeah your 100% right about they lose value when you up em on your soundclick page, plus when an artist works with you and wants a beat, his song value is secure too, cause the beat is fresh, nobody has heard it before and shit you know? But yo if you could help a brother out, than feel free to. :shifty:
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Re: [NEW] SajN - Blind Ambitions

Postby King Jafee » Nov 26th, '08, 13:06

dude WTF!!!!!!!!!!

is english ur second language homie!!!!

if so START RHYMIN IN UR NATIVE LANGUAGE CUZ WTF!!!!!!!!!!

that beat was ILL and u FUCKED IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!

how can folks come on here and say anything but the truth!!!!!!!!!!!

U HAVE ZERO TALENT I GIVES NO FUCK IF YOU GOT BETTER I CANT UNDERSTAND U!!!!

so sorry for yellin rhyme in ur own language and do u

the beat was dope i heard u say fuck at the end the rest is mush mouthed crazy talk

wtf i cant believe i kept listenin till the end

the beat rocked hard so big up the producer

u need to become an engineer or something

listen to some good music homie The Sex Files http://www.zshare.net/download/5186144334852c56/
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Re: [NEW] SajN - Blind Ambitions

Postby SajN » Nov 26th, '08, 13:53

Ok.
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