Xray wrote:I don't know if the beat is sampled or not, because the piano sounds sampled, but i love it. Melody is awesome, drums are weak, didn't match at all. I feel it needed that undergroundish drums you know? but cool beat from Mart.
Like I said before, you still sound like you have something in your mouth when your rapping, very boring. You sound like your extremely bored, and you have a tremendous accent. I don't know how you can improve your accent, I mean my parents don't know how to speak English and if they raped they would have a better accent than you, weird example lol.
Lyrics don't mean shit if the spitting is wack, you know? You haven't improved at all from your last audio, and I mean at all. You sound EXACT the same. I told you before quit rapping in English it's not cut out for you, you ignored me and said rapping in Norwegian is boring, yeah like you rapping in English isn'tlol
This concept falls in the same group as all your concepts, need to switch it up every now and then. You wanted my feedback so here it is, lol I'm not afraid to tell anyone he sucks or anything so that's why I sound like a dick, but the way I see it, harsh feedback gets to you more than false feedback like the rest of everyone that left you feed, saying it sounded good, or good job when it's a very very shit job.
I would have to agree with him, if your accent was lessened you could be a very prominent force..
you gotta work on that more. You've probably been working on it for awhile and me saying this may sound redundant, but it has to be said.