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New Emadyville

Postby Emadyville » Dec 10th, '08, 16:33

"The Bait" http://www.myspace.com/ddubswinch

You all better be ready to witness the sickest,
Most twisted in-this come visit the trickiest,
I stick-ta-this cause it’s my business to pick-this,
Every disc-is exquisite with linguistics,
Yeah I done did-it come get-it who want it,
I live it and come from it, so if you confronted,
It’s straight murder on these tape’s whenever I dump-on-it,
Just jump-on-it and leave every chump lumped-on-it,
I’ve pumped-on-it everything from this dudes-on-it,
I’m the new chronic ready to “leave” you despondent,
The respondent couldn’t breathe believe phonics,
Are deep-on-it, you feeling froggy, leap-on-it,
You’d just speak-on-it when all I do is bleed-on-it,
I feed-on-it, it’s my breathe I breath-on-it,
The rest make me hit the snooze I sleep-on-it,
I can keep-on-it, or switch to straight rhymes,
If it’s the case my great lines will make your fate mine,
I’m ruthless when I do-this, music so exclusive,
Deduce-it and you can’t reduce-it to stupid,
Cause I move-with the truest so if the fuse-lit,
My movements produce-shit you get confused-with,
So in turn you lose-hits when you talk with loose-lips,
About driving deuce-whips and how you shoot-clips,
It makes some dudes-flip but I just excuse-it,
Talk on youtube clips when you’re just some toothpicks,
And I’m the true-shit with this pen never loose-grip,
Or loose sight in the booth-spit, cash out and move-chips,
I’m the truth-it’s so real bombs make your roof-split,
You all missed the boat and now I move on cruise ships,
And if this isn’t proof-shit I might just freakin lose-it,
And if it’s about units then I ask you to prove-it,
Since you know it’s all skill then you stay reclusive,
And you better, this track I just did lacerate,
At a faster-rate so pass-the-hate in fact I’m past-the-hate,
I’ve been ready blow like all I do is masturbate,
Nah I don’t do it solo so I find girls to collaborate,
That’s the truth, my dictionary does not fabricate,
But it fascinates, goddamn how do I rap it great,
I asked my girl she doesn’t care long as I wrap it great,
In fact I calibrate that this did nothing but captivate,
How am I this good maybe you should start askin-great,
Great will say I never entered I just passed-the-gate,
Walked to phenomenal, went in and wasn’t asked-to-wait,
I was the only one there, can anyone grasp-my-fate,
I didn’t think so, I’ll just wait as you all gravitate,
And wait for the album it’s coming, you just grabbed the bait…

Feedback please :y:
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Re: New Emadyville

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 10th, '08, 22:13

Dude.... wow
10/10 Everything on this track was perfect. Amazing. :worship: :worship:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: New Emadyville

Postby Emadyville » Dec 10th, '08, 22:21

MC Anonymous wrote:Dude.... wow
10/10 Everything on this track was perfect. Amazing. :worship: :worship:


Thanks for the feed :y:
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Re: New Emadyville

Postby Emadyville » Dec 10th, '08, 23:29

Chet Starr wrote:damn dude it was awesome

the flow and lyrics were just super nice, still taking me a second to get use to your voice (but you can't help that lol)

one of the better rappers on here :y: people need to realize


Damn thanks, glad to see people recognizing the skill, thanks for the feed and checking it.
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Re: New Emadyville

Postby Jay-19 » Dec 11th, '08, 02:42

I liked it.
Your flow was on point I guess, but I don't really like that choppy style of rapping, you know what I mean?
Lyrics were top notch, some really sick lines in there man!
Beat is not my cup of tea, but you made it hotter, real talk!
Mixing seemed great, I'm not the right to talk about mixing, but from what I heard, it sounds really fine.

I agree with Chet, you're one of the best on this site right now. :y:
Keep dropping bombs man! :8)
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Re: New Emadyville

Postby Emadyville » Dec 11th, '08, 03:26

Damn thanks Goat, glad you liked it, and I'll be dropping almost weekly for awhile so b ready.
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Re: New Emadyville

Postby Xray » Dec 11th, '08, 08:49

Lol man I'm not sure what this track is meant to be. Neither is it good or bad, it's just weird as hell. The beat is simply shit, the flow is pretty messy to. The delivery is lacking a lot. Do us all a favour please add some effects on your acapella when your mixing. Lyrics are mean't to be good cause you used a couple big words? lol you said on it through out the whole song man, like what the fuck seriously? not feeling this at all.
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Re: New Emadyville

Postby Emadyville » Dec 11th, '08, 08:55

Xray wrote:Lol man I'm not sure what this track is meant to be. Neither is it good or bad, it's just weird as hell. The beat is simply shit, the flow is pretty messy to. The delivery is lacking a lot. Do us all a favour please add some effects on your acapella when your mixing. Lyrics are mean't to be good cause you used a couple big words? lol you said on it through out the whole song man, like what the fuck seriously? not feeling this at all.


That's fine, you're the only who hasn't, but thanks for feeding.
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Re: New Emadyville

Postby Xray » Dec 11th, '08, 09:05

I gave my honest feed, I didn't like it because it wasn't good at all. Wasn't bad either, but it definitely wasn't good. Take it or leave it, I'm just leaving feed because I give a fuck. :y:
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Re: New Emadyville

Postby Emadyville » Dec 11th, '08, 09:07

Xray wrote:I gave my honest feed, I didn't like it because it wasn't good at all. Wasn't bad either, but it definitely wasn't good. Take it or leave it, I'm just leaving feed because I give a fuck. :y:


I know, I appreciate it, I don't expect everyone to like all my songs, I was just saying, most people really liked it, so take that for what it is.
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Re: New Emadyville

Postby Xray » Dec 11th, '08, 09:12

Were all improving man, we still got a lot to learn bro. So don't think when I say I'm not feeling a song means that I'm 100% right nah, that's just a basic opinion. Just don't quit, keep doing what you do and you'll get there. Stay up. :b:
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Re: New Emadyville

Postby Emadyville » Dec 11th, '08, 09:24

Cheers to that :b:
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Re: New Emadyville

Postby Solace » Dec 12th, '08, 22:58

Dude thats great, the beat was fire, the flow was good, delivery was good too! The lyrics..sooooo.... :y: Great multies man seriously.
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Re: New Emadyville

Postby Emadyville » Dec 13th, '08, 00:23

shadymademe wrote:Dude thats great, the beat was fire, the flow was good, delivery was good too! The lyrics..sooooo.... :y: Great multies man seriously.


Thanks, glad you noticed the rhymes, thats what this was about, lyrically killing it, thanks again for taking the time :y:
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