IceKilla wrote:i like the beat's feel, kinda mystical/epic.
for ur first track it's great. lyrics were great, and the flow was pretty good. tho it was somewhat up and down. spitten it really fast, so it was hard to understand sometimes. but i thought it was sick.
chorus was great, tho it didn't fit beat that well.
verse 2 was much better than verse 1, the emotion was there, delivery was somewhat off, but the lyrics and power of the words saved it.
verse 3, wasn't as good as 2, but had much better delivery.
yea, mixing wasn't that great, but hey, ur first track, and none of us are really professionals. so decent. great track tho. 7/10. not relistanable really, but definitely a great start for a great artist. u can only get better.
Thanks dude!
