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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Emadyville » Dec 1st, '08, 20:52

Big Proof 4ever wrote:its not that i liked it that much sorry if i hurted ur feelings lol nahh im just kiddin i didnt even listen because my net is slow to listen shit online :D :D


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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 2nd, '08, 00:22

Emadyville wrote:
Big Proof 4ever wrote:its not that i liked it that much sorry if i hurted ur feelings lol nahh im just kiddin i didnt even listen because my net is slow to listen shit online :D :D


Word, I'll send it, but I EXPECT THOROUGH FEED NOW! :whistle:

LOL, you a n00b for expecting such a heavy burden... :spank:
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 2nd, '08, 00:46

wow

you got me deep in those lyrcs man :worship: :worship: :worship:

I love them, but myspace is bein gay atm

so can u zshare so I can listen to this masterpiece? :y:
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Emadyville » Dec 2nd, '08, 02:08

Big Ax-D wrote:wow

you got me deep in those lyrcs man :worship: :worship: :worship:

I love them, but myspace is bein gay atm

so can u zshare so I can listen to this masterpiece? :y:


Yeah I'll pm it to you as well tomo, thanks for checking it.
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Big Proof 4ever » Dec 2nd, '08, 18:13

aight man its very good song u have good flow and delivery but i missed confident in ur voice,i mean no emotions and emotions comes wit confident and believin in what are u sayin,it sounds bit boring,u have to say some lines or words ostentatiously(if its right word :sweating: )everything is grey and u need to put some green or red,get me? :D besides that song is very good i liked it :flower: wud like to do a song wit ya :whistle:
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 2nd, '08, 22:50

word, thanks for the link

koo, like I said, lyrics are simply amazing :worship:

beat fits them really well.. your flow is excelent, but the mixin is a bit bad, can't judge exactly but you need to add more power and volume to your verse, you got a nice rap voice, but like Profaz said, you don't feel like believing the rhymes you need confidence... maybe its bout the mixing, but amazing track

the sample on the hook is amazing

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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Emadyville » Dec 3rd, '08, 02:54

Big Ax-D wrote:word, thanks for the link

koo, like I said, lyrics are simply amazing :worship:

beat fits them really well.. your flow is excelent, but the mixin is a bit bad, can't judge exactly but you need to add more power and volume to your verse, you got a nice rap voice, but like Profaz said, you don't feel like believing the rhymes you need confidence... maybe its bout the mixing, but amazing track

the sample on the hook is amazing

:worship:


Thanks man appreciate the feed, I always use it to improve.
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 13th, '08, 13:09

man this is hot as hell , i dont know what is this supposed to mean :D , but anyway this is sick man , , i like love songs , and i really find this one great u know i mean , lyrics actually nd rhymes were decent , flows was sick , nd ya delivery was to the point and clear . so it's hot .. overall 9.5/10 :y:
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Emadyville » Dec 13th, '08, 17:37

z_em wrote:man this is hot as hell , i dont know what is this supposed to mean :D , but anyway this is sick man , , i like love songs , and i really find this one great u know i mean , lyrics actually nd rhymes were decent , flows was sick , nd ya delivery was to the point and clear . so it's hot .. overall 9.5/10 :y:


Thank you for checking it out.
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby KDEWolf » Dec 14th, '08, 06:31

Wow ur vocals are way to thin i would widen it. Also u have little to no reverb on the mix.
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Skorp » Dec 30th, '08, 22:06

Damn, my speakers must not work very well cuz i could barelly make out what you were saying..but the lyrics is hot homie. The beat is fiya too..who made this shit?
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Emadyville » Dec 30th, '08, 23:25

Thanks to both of you, I got the beat offline. Scott I am redoing the song tomorrow actually, and recording "love will part 2" so um just wait on the re-done version and the sequel and then get at me :y:
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Re: "LOVE WILL" NEW SONG

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 31st, '08, 01:05

wow, awesome track, i like your writing style and how ur tracks are put together
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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