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New Emadyville "Surviving the Times"

Postby Emadyville » Dec 24th, '08, 21:04

http://www.myspace.com/ddubswinch

Today is almost gone, whose looking for tomorrow yo,
I’m sorrowful, on a search to borrow love it’s horrible,
Will I survive these times and be alive on the grind when,
These rhymes define men in the lines times ten,
Like my minds my pen disguised and blind when,
Words don’t do it justice and I can’t find them,
Some search for greatness, some search for infamous,
Some die trying and I don’t see any differences,
To this path I’m following, just swallowing pride,
Feeling hollow inside, with these wallowing eyes,
I could grab the bottle and go full throttle to ride,
My heart died for a model wrote a novel and rhymed,
I’m a slave to the beats, I’m both brave and a beast,
Rhymes I crave when I eat, I don’t behave when I feast,
Until the grave I’ll compete and survive the grind,
If I don’t survive in time…let me survive in the rhymes,

Feedback appreciated :y:
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Re: New Emadyville "Surviving the Times"

Postby Solace » Dec 27th, '08, 04:30

Motherfuck man, no ones feeding? Its Christmas people :o

Ill check it out and feed after :flower:

EDIT: I like how you got those mixed lines by other rappers. Really nice chorus :y: Mixing was good imo, did you do it yourself? Loving the lyrics, its a nice song. I really liked it, relistenable, i liked the beat/instrumental too. For some reason i really like this line, i dont know why:

"I’m a slave to the beats, I’m both brave and a beast, "
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Re: New Emadyville "Surviving the Times"

Postby KDEWolf » Dec 27th, '08, 06:34

Chill track. :y:
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Re: New Emadyville "Surviving the Times"

Postby theJFKshow » Dec 27th, '08, 09:15

:y: :y: :y: :y: :y: :y: :y:


fucking really good.
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Re: New Emadyville "Surviving the Times"

Postby Jay-19 » Dec 28th, '08, 03:11

Can't find any other thing to describe this track other than great.

Your rhymes are sick and well written.
Only thing is that you tend to speed up a little at some parts, but fuck that when the track's hot!
Love the vibe of the track, kinda sad but at the same time.. proud... or something. Can't really put my finger on it.

But anyways, great little tune man! :y:
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Re: New Emadyville "Surviving the Times"

Postby <Stiiccy> » Dec 28th, '08, 10:02

Dude the beat is so fucking insane WHERE THE FUCK DID YOU GET THIS SHIT...(pm me)

8/10

really great shit dude...

incredible lyrics

great flow...

but the damn delivery is still slacking dude...i gotta help you out with it man...

anywho great track!! dont fucking forget to pm me tho haha
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Re: New Emadyville "Surviving the Times"

Postby Emadyville » Dec 29th, '08, 17:51

Damn I'm glad everyone liked this, this was one of my favs, and I wrote a second verse and in time there will be a full song.

Sticcy my laptop broke it'll be awhile until I get my itunes shit back, just remind me and I'll send it to you when I get it. I got it off soundclick.
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Re: New Emadyville "Surviving the Times"

Postby mcZu » Dec 30th, '08, 18:57

Damnn.. This is sick, better then youe '' A new day '' :y:
It was short but strong, lyrics were great, liked the message. Your flow was onspot, just one moment it was like a lil' bit off. Delivery and emotion were :y:
Keep it up, can't wait to hear the second verse :b:
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Re: New Emadyville "Surviving the Times"

Postby Emadyville » Dec 30th, '08, 23:28

Thanks man, yeah I was planning on that 2nd verse it's written and shit just need to find time in recording it, but glad you liked, thanks for feeding :y:
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Re: New Emadyville "Surviving the Times"

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 31st, '08, 00:50

great piece, i enjoy the audio :y: :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: New Emadyville "Surviving the Times"

Postby Emadyville » Dec 31st, '08, 04:44

Kaotic wrote:great piece, i enjoy the audio :y: :y:


Thanks for checking and feeding it.
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Re: New Emadyville "Surviving the Times"

Postby Robbie G » Dec 31st, '08, 05:28

I listened to this a few days ago on your myspace. Like sticcy said it was dope, but your delivery could be better. :y:
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Re: New Emadyville "Surviving the Times"

Postby Emadyville » Dec 31st, '08, 06:08

Shady Babie wrote:I listened to this a few days ago on your myspace. Like sticcy said it was dope, but your delivery could be better. :y:

Thanks for feeding, yeah I was just going for a real sad tone, I guess I didn't pull it off as well as I had hoped.
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